Tasha

Jack and Martha are sooo cute Poor Lara. Great chapter Please update soon

Great chapter. Tasha is stupid, if lying to Martha means getting Jack and Martha back together why the heck is she hesitating, kah! she is so so stupid. Poor Jack and Martha though, i dont like it when their sad, then i get sad Please update soon

haha, you and me both. Great chapter though Shannon. Paul and Jodz are soooo cute Love em both. And love Nic And Sarah and Em, yay!

One word: Yipeeeeeee!! Their getting married, now they can have the baby Great chapter Please update soon

I love it. It so reminds me of Laguna Beach, the bitchiness, the different cliques. Its perfect Only thing i didnt like was Jack sleeping with Gyspy, but the rest is great, and im glad Jack and Martha are still together Please continue

I cant believe you killed Jack :o Im so sad now, what a way to start off my dad Great chapters though, well the writing was great, not the part where Jack dies and Martha suffers Please update soon

Wow, i just read the last 3 chapters. Great work. Yay, Martha loves Jack and alwayz has, now they can be together. One question though, Martha told Carl that she was pregnant, but she obviously didnt mention the one-night stand right?? And i was just wondering, would the reason behind his reaction be that his infertile and that is why he is confused to how Martha got pregnant?? I really hope thats true, so then Jack and Martha and the baby can be a happy family Great chapters though. Loving this fic Please update soon

OMG that was soooo sweet. When i was reading it, about how the lil girl got to Jack and whatnot, i was like, awww shes like Martha, and she was a Martha. And that last line was the sweetest ever. This was such a beautiful fic. I loved it. Very different from what ive read before. Nice work Clair. Congrats.

BELLE IS BUYING A GUN???? Isnt that like illegal?? And Martha better not die, and this cancer better go away. ok, neither Martha or Jack or Baby Sophie or the baby/babies that Martha is carrying better die. Cant wait for more

Nooo...dont die Mattie Great chapter. Jack is so sweet <3 Please update soon

I cant believe you gave Martha cancer :o Why do people have to be so cruel, whhhhy??? LOL at Mattie and Belle, that was entertaining. Yay, Henry is back Please update soon

Oh god. I hope Mattie is alright Poor Luc and Jack. Good chapter Please update soon

hmmm...At first i thought it was Henry that was back, but when i read that last paragraph i had second thoughts, but i think i'll stick with Henry, just wonder what he has against Lucas. Ummm...got no idea whose after Sally. Cant wait for the full chapter

AWww...that was beautiful. Please update soon

Poor Nic. Who would want to leave him, hes gorgeous, oh and his not married I hope Chris dont leave, and Poor Sarah and Emily Please update soon With Paul and Jodi

I knew you were going to kill Jack. But im so happy that his with Martha now. Great chapter. It was sad, but lovely. Please update soon

oh thank god. But now your going to make Martha hate Jack, and then they'll break up, and thats just horrible, but i guess its better that Martha is alive and not with Jack, then her being dead. But Jack will suffer either way, so its all good Cant wait for more

Pleeeeease update soon. I just re-read the whole fic, and its a good thing i did 'cause i missed 3 chapters But now you have to really update

Great chapter. Please let Martha be alright. Please update soon

OMG i am actually crying here. I cant believe Jack just told that guy to shoot Martha. OMG if Martha dies, i will hate Jack sooo much. I cant believe you could actually do that. Poor Martha. I have real tears falling down my face *cries* Please update soon

Yaaaay you didnt leave it for the next chapter. But the next one is the last But that was awesome. They finally kissed *woot woot* That was soo good. Please update soon

Uh oh, its either Jack, Martha or Baby Holden thats in danger, and i pray its not Martha or the baby, or Jack, but yeh the baby cant be harmed. Great chapter though. Please update soon