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Fantastic writing. Aww! jack is such a sweetie and poor Martha. Now Nicole I hope you don't let history repeat itself!! Please post more soon.

LMAO Great writing Not going to look at that movie the same way again

Very emotionally, superb writing as usual Update as soon as you can.

Brilliant writing! You should be proud. Aww! I can't believe shes gone. It was soo sweet when he asked where her strength came from and she said him. Post more soon...

uh oh! Hope Jack isn't hurt Update soon.

Brilliant writing bay girl!!! please update soon.

Aww! Cute!! Great start. Update soon.

omg! that was soo beautifully written! Poor Martha would hate to leave my family..... I forgive you as you wrote it beautifully Update when you can.

Great chapter Jack is injured far too much... to be injured again. update soon please.

Martha can't be dead its like against the law. Update soon.

:D Sian + Chapter 50 = Happy Sian. Great writing, I'm sooo happy there togther. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Two brilliant chapters Great writing. Aww! Poor Martha

Jack is proof parerwork is fun Update soon please. Great writing.

Aww! how cute. I haven't been on a picnic in a while but then again I haven't got someone as hot as Jack to take me on one..... Lol Post more soon.

Very well written. How sweet?!?!?

Ok I forgive you, lol Mia is a beautiful name unlike Sian Update soon please.

Right I'm adopting Seriously your description was GREAT! Aww! a girl, I think the name Sians nice please post more soon.

Just read both chapters, they're great =) Good writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Same here Great writing =) looking forward to the next chapter.

Aww! all I can say is Aww! Jack is her hero. Ahaha loved hte meal scene Update soon.

Great writing

Great chapter I'm not angry that they didnt kiss, I like the building up your doing to them finally kissing Post more soon.

Labour sounds fun not! lol I watched it in child development. Atleast Jack got there and I loved the line about the baby not liking Jacks kisses Please post more soon. Great writing

I love the Lucas and Martha friendship. Poor Jacky I hope Martha doesnt go into labour