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Now Jacks got to come up with a plan to get rid of Carl.... Hmm.. Great writing.

Wow! Amazing writing. I feel nothing for Jack - he brought it on himself! Poor Martha, she should have kicked Jack out! but then again walking out on him, hurt him I'm in a heartless mood. Great writing and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Lol I was thinking 'Yess' when I read about Tasha slipping over and now its not going to happen. I have forgiven her for your last fic, but for something bad/funny to happen to her makes me happy. I'm wierd I guess. Anyway, This Henry better not hurt my Jack or else!!! Poor Jack not only does he have Martha on his back but he has Peter too. Great writing as usual. Update soon.

^^ Oh ok But still lol He's marrying Jack's girl which is unforgivable and make him hateable in my book. don't know about anyone else? By the way on another note I forgot to say I love the title

Gosh he sounds mean there! talk about kicking a man when hes down... I think he knows about Jack feelings for Martha so is being horrible Juicy! lol I hope Jack tells her soon. Great chapter, loverly writing

Sad. Update soon.

It was a dream... poor Jack.

Love the drama! and yeah you should pst your fic because your writing is amazing so I'm sure that fic will be too Poor Martha.

Shes pregnant!!!! Overall sweet chapter! Update soon please. great writing.

Aww! I didn't want Macca to leave! and its really nice to have Flynn in the story I miss him loads Nice update, looking forward to seeing more.

Aww! can I say anymore?.. no Aww! Your really good at explaining what someone who has loft their partner is feeling. Well done.

Aww! Great writing. Poor Jack. Jack should do what Alfie did at Kats wedding to the wanna be gangster in Eastenders lol Don't know why I said that but I just randomly remembered Can't wait for the next chapter.

I hope Martha is pregnant!! Great writing, update soon.

Peter shut your mouth! More soon please.

Aww! Poor Martha can she take anymore?? I DON'T want him to leave either, he speaks alot of sense Update soon, brilliant writing as usual.

God! Martha is annoying lol why should he quit his job?!?!? He looks sexy in his uniform!. lol Update soon.

Aww! i'm upset now! lol Very good writing though. Well done

Great chapter can't wait for the next chapter. Great writing too.

Very sad. Aww! Jack... Fanastic writing.

great chapter. Jack wouldn't have to ask me twice lol I probely wouldn't wait for an invite either... Looking forwrad to teh next chapter.

what she said. More soon please.

^^Lol Aww! I'm sad when I'm sad I need ice cream and I don't have any. Poor Jack! update soon please.

Aww! Jack and Martha are sooo cute. Poor Tony (LMAO) bet he was embarrassed Update soon please.