What? What just happened? Um, I don't think that did. What?
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Wow, I didn't expect that!
Okay, I loved it! You had so many twists and turns in that it was great!! I totally did not expect the Ric and Mattie kiss! I could completely feel Matilda's shock! It was so out of the blue, it was great And soooo sweet!
And then your second twist...Wow, that just made your story so much deeper. But I hope she doesn't die :'( I wonder how Ric will feel and act towards Mattie.
Great job, it really was. Aww, please update soon!