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OMG Was not expecting that. I've been a bad lurker for a bit but this made me comment. Was so surprised by that, thanks for you update really pleased you wrote it loved your writing as always. Worried for Belle and the baby hope they are OK hope Aden is unharmed . Update soon

just hopeing they have a happy spell before they hit there next rocky patch. Loved the chapter hope you update soon.

Oh that was really sweet Nicole being the controled one!!! She has grown up!

This is so so sad. So well written. But how are Aden and Belle going to cope with this

Interested to see where this goes. Good to read a fic centered on a different character than the others on the board at the moment.

Hope this is Edward wake up call, hope he finds a way to realise that there is something worth going on for.

I'm really teary now, how come everyone's fics are really sad today? This was so sad loved Hannah needing Edward so much.

Really enjoy that you always have such a sideways view of things makes for great fics. Looking forward to where you take this.

Thanks for the update liked Aden trying to make things better worried about the sleep thing, know how much sleep deprivation affects people, my father has real sleep issues as do I so I know what it's like to go to work after not sleeping properly for several days and the sort of zombie state you end up in, the older you get the worse it is I used to be able to cope but now..... now I end up asleep in the day at work........ Whoops!

I've still been reading thank you for finishing I've just been really rubbish at replying recently sorry. Liked him having to find an excuse which fitted and only Matilda believing Ric. Liked his idea of what could have happened in a third parallel universe.

Loved it nice break from the drama, not saying drama isn't fab. Great to have Amanda back. Can't wait for more of Aden trying to sort out his issues.

You should definatly keep writting, if it's this fic or another is up to you, depends on where you think the story is going.

Oh poor Aden he's beating himself up so much and self flagellation is just so unattractive (as an exponent myself), Belle seems to spend her whole time defending herself for hiding things and this time I feel she may have been justified she can't say she wasn't warned right from the first time. Like how this ties back to your previous fic. Having a long word moment!!!!

I keep meaning to comment on this, the differences between the parallel universe and the original one. Interested to find out more. Looking forward to more.

Aden is going to be really hurt but he needed to find out about his nightmares and how they hurt Belle hope he finds a way round this a doesn't beat himself up to much

That was so emotive, the poignant picture of a life of unfulfilled opportunities, really well written.

I loved this all the smoldering unresolved frustrations and pent up emotions. Really enjoyed the conversation between Roman and Aden

Lovely ending Realy sweet.

That was so well written tieing the fic back to Untroubled worked really well. Good luck with your exams.

Love silence tension and the shear pent up emotion that it conveys so strongly after a disagreement. loved this chapter you may have felt it was filler but it says so much about where there head's are at. It was so strong.

What a great idea, both endings are fantastic.

I'd like to thank everyone for their lovely comments pleased everyone liked where it ended, wasn't sure what you'd think but thank you for your responses. I'll try and write more soon but just looking for inspiration at moment. Not sure what time I'm going to have as I decided to try and persuade my boss to fund me on a distance degree (or I might put myself throught it) so if that happens won't have much time.

I think you have delt with Belle's deseption well it has big implications for all three of them and a clever use of Drew to be there for Belle and prevent the interaction between Belle and Aden coming to a conclusion leaving things open for a variety of resolutions, glad you are continueing the angst into more chapters, it needs more time. Thank you.

Like this idea really different. Hope you continue

Really fascinated, the more I read the more I get into it. Breaking all the friendships and reforming them gives some fantastic opportunities for drama