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Very well written. Really enjoyed Belle being strong and speaking to Aden and making herself heard. Congratulations

Oh she done it now I think the secret has been secret a little to long!!!!! Great updates. Looking forward to more

Sad beautiful well written what more can I say.

I'm liking this so many possibilities!!!! Looking forward to more

Congratulations that was fab your writing was, as ever, fantastic. Loved the end. Good luck with your new job. Thank you so much.

I can see that Belle was trying to prevent Aden getting hurt and I think that it important to get Justin to really consider that meeting up with Aden would have implications for both of them, not just for him and to remind him that there were negative implications of his leaving for his then small brother. Belle did come across as defencive over protective and naive given the experiences she has had, and therefor knowing the consequences of lies. Hope you intended to do this cause if you did it could be the beginning of some interesting chapters and well Belle does have her moments of being naive and stupid so this is probably very in keeping But I still love you fic. Have a good Christmas

Two more amazing chapters the sweetest New Years eve so glad that the news of the babies birth didn't set Belle back. Going to miss this fabulous fic when it's finished.

Wow that was the most beautiful date and chapter and well just the most fab fic. Loved this and can't wait for the sequel thank you for all the effort you have put into writting it shows.

Wow. Don't know what else to say but wow. Short it may be but it packs a good sized punch! Loved it.

I loved this your fic is so good cant believe it's nearly over. Loved Christmas all of them together and Belle really starting to change and the last chapter was so sweet showed just how far Belle has come. Love it update soon.

That was so beautifully written and so emotional. Loved the conflict within Belle, her wanting to hate Aden for leaving but being uncontrollably drawn to him.

Haven't commented for ages the fluff was all really sweet, but although I hate to admit it I really loved this bit, like the stranger turning up (you need some one to dislike) and adding some mystery and tension. Looking forward more angst, well nothing goes well for long.

Been really busy the last couple of weeks so got not had time to sit and focus on the next bit which I'm finding difficult to get right anyway have some time between Christmas and new year when every one else has to go to work, so I'll try and get to grips with this then.

Thank you for all the chapters. Your writing is so insightful really good descriptions of Belle's journey, the relationship between her and Aden is sweet. The description of Amanda is interesting, not sure she is how I pictured she would be, too strong in a weak way, i figured she would be more cowered less likely to stand up to him. Found Irene really caring and loved her wanting to protect Belle. Looking forward to the rest of chapters

This brought a tear to my eye, really sad. The miss placed sarcasm was really realistic, the sort of thing I would do when I can't cope with what I'm feeling and don't know how to talk about whats the matter. I'm glad she was honest about her regrets after admitting problems is really cathartic.

I've been really busy for the last week and I've just been catching up and what can I say your fic is written with so much emotion and sensitivity. Your portrayal of the pain and suffering Belle experiences are well described and the balance with the normality of Annie's crush and Nicole's puffed up but silent self importance makes an intriguing contrast

I've loved this just caught up as I've been busy this week and what can I say I love this, the wedding was so lovely them on there honeymoon was gorgeous, the baby moving was so sweet. Loved them coming home to the house all done up by the others really fab and boy wanting credit for things they haven't done, the same the world over, in fic and real life!!!

Interesting, questions to be answered which is always a good thing

Perfect end to pretty intence week lots of fluff fantstic loved it. Think that they swapped lines was great showed how much Aden had moved on and how it's interesting seeing there interaction now it's Belle who has the issues

That was lovely, a realy special finish loved it. Thanks Happy Hols

Loved this Aden needing to work out where to go now and also Geoff and Nicole working out one of the most important lessons in life, that it doesn't matter how much you love some one, that is not enough, there is so much more that has to be right and if it's wrong how ever hard you try it will only frustrate you or stop you being yourself. Thanks for writing this it is so good to have a fic which is different in tone from many of the others it's good to have a change.

So pleased you have felt able to write this. I think your portrayal of Belle is fantastic really moving. Can't wait to hear more.

So pleased you have felt able to write this. I think your portrayal of Belle is fantastic really moving. Can't wait to hear more.

That made me laugh so much you must have been observing drunk people realy well to have written that!!!! Any way loved it piddled Bell was so funny.

Fantastic think your way of dealing with this is really great liked that Aden is getting help and understand that after what has happened the stigma attached to asking has gone in his mind. Pleased he wants to move on, it's really hard to get to that place in your head and very easy for circumstances to turn you back not forward.