Jen

Of course it's Jack! *feels incredibly stupid* Still great work. Look forward to reading more.

I'm not sure whether Rosey PM'ed you, but she has had to stop proofing my fic. I would still like one so, is there anyone to available to take over. Just in case you need it the details of my fic are as follows; Proof Reading Form Title of Story: Fueled for Love Type of Story: Long fic: 20-25 Chapters The story’s rating: T (VD) Main Characters: Cassie, Matilda, Lucas, Drew Does it contain spoilers: No What type of proof reader would you like: Proof reader to improve my writing and help me develop some ideas, as well as the basic SPAG etc.

Another great chapter. So wait - Lucas has a brother! And two guys are being paid to kill him? This is getting confusing! but great work. Very intriguing. Can't wait to read more.

Thankies Anna.

Just the one...

Of course! And thanks.

Another great chapter. Your descriptions are becoming more detailed, the more you write. Can't wait to see where you take this next. I hope Lucas can save Tony!

Thanks Louise and Liska.

Thanks Angel

Thanks Anna, Liska and Flora. Liska, that's Isabel (Tasha) and Indiana (Matilda). It's quite an old pic, I think.

Thankies!

Thank you Liska and Rosey.

Thanks Liska, Louise, *purple*star*, Anna and Eli Another Mattie set ...

Oooh ... predicting the future. Very interesting. He still looked cute when he was running. Aww ... cute. I'm a sucker for a Mattie/Lucas pairing

Thanks Liska A Mattie set:

Really good, Caitie. You write Lucas' P.O.V really well. I also liked the flashback. Keep up the good work

Thanks for the comments baybee_powda, kiwi_151 and Liam. Much appreciated. Hopefully will have an update shortly when my proofer gets back to me.

Cheers Louise, Anna and Liska

Thanks Coco and Flora

Any comments? I really want to continue, so any feedback would be appreciated.

Not at all! I really liked that part. The way you wrote it was great, especially the sudden rush before the story fell back into the present. Nice work!

^ Awesome! Just got home from uni. Am going to work in an hour... But yesterday I finally got my own copy of HP7. Yay! Haven't started reading yet.