Barbara

Great chapters! No, Jack, it wasn't a mistake. You love Martha. Dump Sam! Sam really needs to go. Martha's pregnant! A baby Holden! I hope Martha nor Jack are going to die in the accident. Please update soon...

Awesome chapter! Jack and Martha love each other! They can't take their hands of each other. They are so busted! That made me laugh! Jack and Martha won't be allowed to sleep in the same bed anymore??? But wait... Martha's 19 and Jack's 20, they're old enough. I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter! Please update soon...

Great oneshot! Martha loves Jack. Why does she push him away? Jack and Martha belong together. Sam really needs to go! Love the video! Me too!

Great chapter! Poor Martha! I love Tash. I hope the pill works. Let's hope they use protection now! Jack is ready for a real relationship! That's good! Please update soon...

Yay they had sex! But they're stupid, they didn't use protection! She has to take the morning after pill! On the other hand, I like the idea of them having a baby. Please update soon...

Great chapter! Martha should tell him how she really feels if she wants him that much. Preferably before he meets another girl. At least they're friends again, that's something. More please!

The end was so sad! Poor Martha! She's so confused. Jack could be her best friend and her boyfriend.

Great chapter! I understand why Martha didn't want to go any further but I was a little sad when she hurt his feelings. Jack definitely loves Martha. He should dump Laurie and tell Martha how he feels. I like Kim's reaction. Please update soon

Nice chapter! Something is finally happening between them! Why did you end it there? Can't wait for the next chapter!

I like it already! Poor Martha! I wonder who pushed her down the stairs. Sam maybe? Please update soon!

Great chapters! Jack and Martha need to realise they love and need each other. Jack is so jealous. He scared me when he grabbed Tasha. Tasha is not nice, she's happy Martha doesn't spend time with Jack anymore even if Martha is sad about it. I hope Billy will be nice to Martha. If he's not, Jack has to save her. Please update soon...

That's a very sad chapter! It's Jack's fault. Maybe he will finally realise how much he really loves Martha. She can meet a nice guy and Jack will be jealous. The end was so sweet. More please...

Dirty Dancing

Great chapter. I liked it when Martha started to remember the previous night. Jack couldn't stop laughing. It was funny. I hate Lily!!! Poor Martha. Jack should have stayed with her. He's going to regret this. I don't want them to fight! Please update soon.

Nice chapter. I agree with Jamey-Maria. Jack and Martha were getting so close. Why did Lily decide to go to the spa? Jack should have left with Martha, they were supposed to spend the day together! Noooo. They should be together!

Funny chapter. Thank God Jack came before that guy could do something to Martha. Martha is hilarious when she's drunk. I don't think she will be that happy to wake up in Jack's arms... practically naked. Especially if she remembers taking a shower in front of him! Please update soon.

Poor Martha! I hope she will find a nice guy who will love her and respect her. Jack will be jealous and realise he is losing his best friend. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great fiction! I love Martha and Jack's relationship. They're so close and so cute. They should be together. I hope Lily will leave them alone.