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This is a very sad but brilliant chapter! I've never had an eating disorder but I knew a girl who had. She's better now but she really scared us back then. It all started because of a girl she had met at her sports club. I don't get why some people like to be mean to other people. What's so fun about that? I really don't understand! Jack is so sweet. I hope Ranya and Kim are going to be nicer now. Hopefully Martha will get better now she has admitted that she had an eating disorder and tried to commit suicide. That face from the past better not ruin everything! More please.

No Martha! No, Jack, you don't want to be with Sophie anymore. She cheated on you. There's another girl out there for you. You've already met her. Wonder who is watching them. That doesn't sound good. More please.

Besides if Paul had a MySpace, wouldn't it be mentioned on his official website? Usually, celebrities mention their official website address on their MySpace and their MySpace on their official website.

I've noticed that too, especially during sales or in December because of the holidays. It's so annoying. The other day, the woman in front of me mentions nicely to another woman that she's jumping in and she gets mad. Excuse me but she's the one who's jumping in, so why does she get mad? Then, the saleswoman told her nicely to get in line and that woman got mad again, said that she would never come into that store again and left. Some people can be so rude. Besides, I was the last one in the queue and there were only 3 women in front of me. She wouldn't have had to wait for a long time, maybe 5 or 10 minutes.

Very cold.

Two great chapters! Martha recoiled from the kiss. She doesn't want to get hurt but Jack's not going to hurt her or their daughter. Emma shouldn't be running away from her mother like that. Luckily, she was with Sally and Flynn. At least, this brought Jack and Martha closer together. That's really good. I think Jack said "never leave me" to both of them. He loves Martha and Emma. Only 4 more chapters to go More please.

Nice work. I really like the 2nd Mattie/Lucas one. That effect looks really good.

Poor Martha! I hope she gets better. Nice speech, Jack! More please.

^ I always think December is going quickly. Maybe it's because it's the end of the year. I don't know.

Very cold but dry.

Glad Jack made it in time. Martha is still alive. I hope she's going to be ok. This is all Ranya's fault. More please.

Sunny but cold.

I hope Martha's going to be ok. Don't forget what HM (aka Valli) said. She will come and get you.

Jack and Martha have met. That's good. But he had to arrest her. That's bad. At least, she's not being charged. Poor Martha! Her life seems complicated. Jack has a girlfriend or should I say "had a girlfriend"? Maybe he can go to dinner with Martha now. More please.

It rained a little this morning. This afternoon, it was sunny for a while. Now it's just cold.

What a sad chapter. Martha being called names, Tasha feeling really sick after one day of treatment and Martha cutting her wrists... Ranya I hope so. Come on, Jack! More please.

Ranya I hate that girl and those stupid paparazzi! Jack and Martha spent their first night together! Why are the other students calling her names? They should know Jack and Ranya broke up even before Martha left. I hope Martha's not thinking about leaving again. Jack will help her get through this. And Tasha is going to need her best friend's support! Don't make her leave, matticus01! More please.

Me neither. We still have to buy one and some new Christmas decorations because we had a flood in our cellar a few weeks ago and it ruined our tree and some of our decorations. Well done, Jen!

It's a good start. I like it! I wonder how Jack and Martha are going to meet. More please.

Can't wait to read about those pure romantic Jack & Martha moments.

Rocco and his brother? I thought it was Josh West... I was thinking about Josh too. Supposedly, Alf used the Surf Club's money to finance his campaign during the elections but it was one of Josh's friends who had tricked him.

Great chapter! Claire and Bernard are Jack's grandparents? I would never have thought of that. I don't think Martha and Jack are going to need Claire to get back together. Emma is so cute! I like her hair obsession. My cousin used to cut the hair of his sister's dolls too and they would fight too. Apparently, boys like to cut dolls hair! Please update soon.

Paparazzi! Why can't they leave them alone? The end of the chapter was so sweet. They love each other.