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Freaky Friday I love that movie

Jack is such a wuss when it comes to horror movies! Kim can say nice things! That's a good thing. Jenny changed her mind. Now they are allowed to sleep together again! Of course, Martha's going to get a kiss. Rachel, we want a kiss!!! More please.

That might help! I speak French and Dutch. I only learnt English at school, by reading English books or by watching Flemish or Dutch television (they broadcast movies and shows in English with Flemish or Dutch subtitles). French television doesn't help, they dub movies and shows. And usually the French voices are horrible, especially when you've already heard the real voice of the English-speaking actor/actress. Have a good run! Hopefully you'll get inspired to write the next chapter!

Great start! I like your writing. English is not my first language either but I would never be able to write like that in English! I thought the idea of Kim and Martha being brother and sister was good. It's something I've never read in other fics. The looks and the smile Martha and Jack shared I love the banner too. Please update soon.

Martha and Jack are back together! I loved the public announcement Jack made. It was beautiful! If the paparazzi find out Martha McKenzie has a boyfriend, they're going to come to Summer Bay, aren't they? They'd better not ruin everything if they come to the Bay! I hope Martha's ready to give up her modelling career for Jack. They love each other. She said she would have stayed if Jack had asked her 2 years ago. Maybe she can do some modelling in Yabbie Creek, that's not so far away from Summer Bay and she would be able to stay with Jack. More please. PS: I hope you had fun while you were away.

Great chapter! The funeral was so sad. I loved the speeches. You're a very good writer! Martha and Jack I also think you mean funeral. More please.

Great chapter! Jack and Martha fighting? Didn't see that coming. More please.

Good chapter! Poor Martha! Leon was very violent with her if she's suffering that much. I hate him! I'm a little disappointed. Jack didn't join her in the bath. Jack's so sweet! The way he takes care of her... But why didn't he kiss her on the lips? More please...

You're lucky in Australia. In Belgium it's almost winter. Actually, we didn't really have a summer this year. No sun and a lot of rain! It's raining. It's freezing.

They're holding hands. Jack wanted to kiss her and Martha's dreaming about them being a happily married couple. Because of Stacey, there won't be a re-union anytime soon, right? Unless Jack dumps her. One of the things they do best? Could it be bickering because Jack didn't tell Martha about Stacey? More please.

I love the way Jack and Martha know when something's bothering the other one. They are so meant to be together. The preview sounds good. Martha won't be happy to know Zoë is still alive. If it's not Zoë, maybe it'll be Corey. I don't know anymore. More please.

Nice chapter! I liked the way Martha saved Jack when Tony asked him to go and get Tash and Robbie. Lovely memories. I would have loved to see Alf's face when he saw 'teenage Martha' disobeying his orders. Paparazzi Can't they leave celebrities alone? Tasha made me laugh! And Robbie's comment! I hope the public attention hasn't destroyed the chance of a re-union. Please update soon.

Great chapter! Poor Martha! Thankfully Jack is there for her. He's so sweet. Kim Can't wait for the next chapter! It sounds great! More please.

I loved the last scene between Martha and Jack. I hope they get back together straight away but that's not going to happen, isn't? That would be too easy. More please.

In The Mix

Poor Martha! Thank God, Jack came just in time! He's my hero! The end of the chapter was so sweet! More please...

Martha's back in Summer Bay. Hopefully she'll help Jack before he is heading in a downwards spiral. More please...

Great chapters even though they're really sad! Poor Martha, Jack and Tony! If Martha doesn't like modelling anymore, she should stay in Summer Bay... with Jack. They'll help each other get through this. More please...

Yay the baby is fine and Martha's awake!!! Zoë? I'd never have thought of her! But is it really her? I'll have to keep on reading then! What a coincidence! In the episode that was broadcast in Belgium tonight, Jack just found out Zoë was still alive (I'm talking about episode 4185). And now I'm reading your fic and she might be back too. I thought that was funny. I think you should add more twists, especially if you already have good ones in your head. As long as you don't hurt Martha, Jack and their baby. Please update soon...

Poor Martha! Leon is a creep, a jerk... Jack, go and save her!!! Martha needs your help! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter. There's so much chemistry between them. She gave him the perfect gift. Why did Tash ruin the moment for them? I think I know what Jack's wish is. Let's hope it comes true! More please...