Di Posted August 27, 2005 Report Posted August 27, 2005 Gosh a very moving and awesome erm.. erm... of work not sure what to call it super mini fan fic!! Congratulations on your temporary promotion at work Quote
I love music Posted August 27, 2005 Report Posted August 27, 2005 Thanks, Di. It's meant to be Josie wakes up with her new guy and realises her feelings for Jesse are still too strong to love anyone else so decides to pack her bags and leave while he's sleeping. I even had a picture in my mind of the bedroom curtains blowing "the breeze on my face". But, having just read it over myself, I think most ppl were probably or or : or even by the end of it! Maybe I should stick to writing fics instead of poetry! Quote
Ashirr-Leigh Posted August 28, 2005 Report Posted August 28, 2005 Nah, I thought it was great! I understood what you meant by it.. I'm actually quite prou that I did, normally I don't get these things! Quote
liam99998204 Posted August 28, 2005 Report Posted August 28, 2005 Thanks, Di. It's meant to be Josie wakes up with her new guy and realises her feelings for Jesse are still too strong to love anyone else so decides to pack her bags and leave while he's sleeping. I even had a picture in my mind of the bedroom curtains blowing "the breeze on my face". But, having just read it over myself, I think most ppl were probably or or : or even by the end of it! Maybe I should stick to writing fics instead of poetry! <{POST_SNAPBACK}> I LOVE IT! Liam Poetry is most certainly your thing. Quote
Jackieleanne Posted September 1, 2005 Report Posted September 1, 2005 Love the poem, and like the others I totally understand about you not being able to post in your other fic, Im the same way at the moment, congratulations on the temp promotion. Quote
Laurie's top Fan Posted September 22, 2005 Report Posted September 22, 2005 It's beautiful. Sound just like Josie Quote
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