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Thanks, Di. It's meant to be Josie wakes up with her new guy and realises her feelings for Jesse are still too strong to love anyone else so decides to pack her bags and leave while he's sleeping. I even had a picture in my mind of the bedroom curtains blowing "the breeze on my face". But, having just read it over myself, I think most ppl were probably :huh: or :wacko: or : :blink: or even :puke: by the end of it!

Maybe I should stick to writing fics instead of poetry! :lol:

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Thanks, Di.  It's meant to be Josie wakes up with her new guy and realises her feelings for Jesse are still too strong to love anyone else so decides to pack her bags and leave while he's sleeping.  I even had a picture in my mind of the bedroom curtains blowing "the breeze on my face".  But, having just read it over myself, I think most ppl were probably :huh: or :wacko: or  : :blink: or even  :puke: by the end of it!

Maybe I should stick to writing fics instead of poetry! 

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I LOVE IT!

Liam :)

Poetry is most certainly your thing.

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