Red Ranger 1 Posted May 10, 2012 Report Posted May 10, 2012 Loved the opening with Gina being slowly driven mad.Woah at that ending!Looking forward to seeing where you take it. Quote
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted May 10, 2012 Report Posted May 10, 2012 Liked the part of Gina not being able to get to sleep because of John's channel bashing. Dex trying to do an Alf impersonation was funny too. Awesome, but shocking ending. Wonder what will happen now. Update soon, as i'm really looking forward to reading this one. Quote
Guest Posted May 11, 2012 Report Posted May 11, 2012 (edited) Great start please update again soon Edited May 11, 2012 by Aden_Belle Quote
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted May 13, 2012 Report Posted May 13, 2012 Poor Alf and John. Typical Colleen was funny her talking about coffee instead of being worried about the pressing matter of Alf's heart attack. Liked the scene with Ruby, Xavier and Dex. Awesome ending once again. Wonder if Xave will try out the competition. Someone's got to try and win the money. Look forward to more Quote
Guest Posted May 13, 2012 Report Posted May 13, 2012 Poor Alf and John please update again soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 13, 2012 Author Report Posted May 13, 2012 Loved Colleen's wittering and the bit between Xavier, Dex and Ruby.That ending was great, can't wait to see what Xavier and Dexter do. Quote
Inactive User Posted May 18, 2012 Report Posted May 18, 2012 Great chapter, Pembie Looking forwards to next one. Quote
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