Red Ranger 1 Posted August 23, 2011 Report Share Posted August 23, 2011 That was nicely written, you showed both characters' thoughts well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted August 24, 2011 Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 That was nicely written, you showed both characters' thoughts well. Thanks! I was stressing over it, I thought that I had made a big mistake on it. I'm glad that I have. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 24, 2011 Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 Nicely written Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted August 24, 2011 Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 Nicely written Thanks! I was going to write a chapter story with it, but I like the One Shot idea. The stories complete. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickiboomxx Posted August 24, 2011 Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 Good story! x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted August 24, 2011 Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 Good story! x Thanks so much! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 24, 2011 Report Share Posted August 24, 2011 I think it works well as a one shot. You wrote it brilliantly. Absolutely beautiful and fantastically portrayed emotions, well done. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InfantryAlex Posted August 29, 2011 Report Share Posted August 29, 2011 I think it works well as a one shot. You wrote it brilliantly. Absolutely beautiful and fantastically portrayed emotions, well done. Love Carina xxx Thanks! I really love Dex and his...geeky enthusiasm for stuff. I can be like him at times, but I don't go all "long words terms" like he does. Lucky I didn't bring too much Xav into it, he's annoying. (Yes, I dislike Xav). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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