HighwayUnicorn Posted September 21, 2011 Report Share Posted September 21, 2011 A nice little chapter there. I liked the way you wrote it. Well done. Carina xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deano Posted October 15, 2011 Report Share Posted October 15, 2011 Um, well sorry there has been no updates, I don't currently have one, I'll try before Monday. I will be going away again, on a musical camp. So there'll be no updates, while I am rehearsing and performing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deano Posted December 3, 2011 Report Share Posted December 3, 2011 here is another chapter I apologise for such a long wait and i have prob lost people who read this, but exams have taken over my life BUT now they are all over for 8 weeks. 5 months later: Charlie felt a sharp pain in her stomach. Angelo was asleep in the bed. Charlie moaned and she shook Angelo's arm. 'Hmmm What?' Angelo said 'I think, I am going.........' 'Into labour?' Angelo questioned. 'Yes labour you idiot' Charlie yelled at him punching his arm. 'OUCH' he yelled back at her. She looked at Angelo realising she hurt him. 'Sorry Babe' She said kissing his lips. 'It's ok, you sure you're in labour' 'Yes Babe' She cringed in pain. 'OK, lets get you to a hospital' Angelo said jumping out of bed in his underwear. 'You better put pants on' she laughed. 'Oh crap' Angelo said covering himself up. Charlie smiled at her favourite man. 'This is really early for you to go into labour Charlie' Angelo questioned zipping up his pants. 'I know, but this pain is unbearable' 'Com-on I'll get Ruby and we'll go to the hospital' 'No, let her sleep. This is a special moment for us' Charlie smiled 'Yeah but this is her brothers and sisters she is going to meet' 'Ok baby, go get her, but if she's too tired leave her. Ok' 'Ok' he smiled. ** 'Ruby honey. Wake up' Angelo said. 'Huh, why?' 'Your mum is in labour sweetheart' 'WHAT' 'Yeah, we gotta get to the hospital' 'OK give me 3 seconds I'll meet you both in the car' 'OK' Angelo walked out of her room and helped Charlie to the car. Ruby followed closely and Angelo put the car into full speed driving as fast as he could. Charlie was screamed in pain and Angelo was trying to keep her calm. He lost control of the car and Charlie kicked the dash board in pain. He tried to regain control, but it was too late. It had ran off the road and smashed into a tree. Blood dripped from Charlie's head and stomach. Angelo face trickled with blood and Ruby's leg was sliced open. It was 4am, the sun wasn't even up and they were on a deserted road with no reception. No one knew they were there. No one was close enough to come to their rescue. Hope you enjoyed the little chapter I wrote. Wont be long for the update MASSIVE surprise coming up and many shocks in the next chapter. SO keep tuned and leave your ideas of what might happen Thank you for waiting around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cb2180 Posted December 3, 2011 Report Share Posted December 3, 2011 Wow I hope that Everyone is going to be ok! Looking forward to the update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted December 3, 2011 Report Share Posted December 3, 2011 Deleted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soph1303 Posted December 4, 2011 Report Share Posted December 4, 2011 Kinda lost track of this fic, WOW! Dramatic ending !!! More soon please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deano Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 Hey sorry guys, I haven't updated in a while, it's because Christmas has rolled around so fast, hours have gone up at work and I just haven't had time, but I promise after Christmas there will be a chapter sitting here for you. A nice fat one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inactive User Posted December 26, 2011 Report Share Posted December 26, 2011 Great chapter. Whoa at the ending! Hope they are okay! Update soon xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deano Posted February 29, 2012 Report Share Posted February 29, 2012 I am really sorry for the promised update that never came, this years studies is so full on, this is the only spare time I got. I PROMISE that I'll get you an update before the end of March. I am currently working on the next chapter between studies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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