mft Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 This is awesome so far Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 This is a very awesome update. Please update again soon. Can't wait to see where you take this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LauraPhilly!! Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 (edited) Omg, that was really good too! I seriously hope that Charlie isn't dead... I've a feeling she is though...?! You always end the chapter at a cliffhanger, mizziette! Please update soon! Can't wait to find out more about what happened! Poor Brax, the whole incident seems to have really shook him! Heath is completely oblivious as to why! He is so blind like! Edited June 12, 2011 by LauraPhilly!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 Very intereesting, a real mystery. Well done Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldscott Posted June 12, 2011 Report Share Posted June 12, 2011 This is a great start to a fic, really looking forward to reading more Lisa x Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Yay, another update. Really well described and written. I loved it, even though the actual story was sad. I hope Charlie is okay. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teespazzr Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Great Update! I'm looking forward to more soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dingo x Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Loving it so far. Can't wait for your next update. xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LauraPhilly!! Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Aw that is just heartbreaking!! Poor Charlie! Nice that Ruby was there to comfort her! This is a really good fic, miziette! I'm really looking forward to what comes next! You love ending each chapter on a cliffhanger! It's not fair! I wonder who the nurse will turn out to be! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted June 13, 2011 Report Share Posted June 13, 2011 Aaah missed a couple of updates. Sorry. But they were really good. I look forward to more after that cliffhanger ... well done, brilliantly written once again. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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