Inactive User Posted February 16, 2011 Report Posted February 16, 2011 Great chapter. I cracked up at Ava's comment Poor Ben I hope he will soon see Chloe when hes ready Loved Nicole and Ruby's chat. Whoa at the ending. Poor Ruby Hope she will be okay. Update soon xx Quote
Chester-Sam Posted February 16, 2011 Report Posted February 16, 2011 Oh dear, looks like she might not be making the decision after all.. Poor Ruby, I wonder how she'll react? Geoff was way out of line, screaming commands at Ruby like that! Great update, - Sam. Quote
carywary Posted February 17, 2011 Report Posted February 17, 2011 Oh poor Ruby, I hope she'll be ok Loved how you brought Geoff into it, although I'm sure it wasn't nice for Ruby getting stuck in the middle of their marital problems. Jessica seems so cute, but I still prefer Woody Ava was so funny when Charlie started taking her clothes off Still loving this Danni! Quote
Sabrina Posted February 19, 2011 Report Posted February 19, 2011 Amazing chapters, Danni! Chapter 88 - Poor Ava I understand why she feels the way she does. I loved Charlie's explanation to Ava about Chloe. I wonder what Ruby's decision will be. Chapter 89 - Geoff really shouldn't have got at Ruby like that - she doesn't need anymore stress. I loved how Ben insisted on being called Woody. Oh no, I hope Ruby and the baby will be ok. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
callyha Posted February 20, 2011 Report Posted February 20, 2011 Poor Ruby. I hope she lets herself grieve...but like Charlie said, she will do it in her own time. I liked how you wrote the hospital part, with Ruby feeling nothing. So true. Ava and Charlie's little day out. Soo cute. Ava is real smart to pick up on the Dad/Angelo. Glad Charlie was able to answer the questions, be hard for her to do. I -like always- loved the update and can't wait to read what happens next Quote
Rach Loves H&A Posted February 20, 2011 Report Posted February 20, 2011 Great Update!!! Poor Ruby, losing the baby. Hope she grieves properly and then moves on. Liked the conversation between Charlie and Ava, hope she doesn't ask any questions about Ruby's father. Update Soon!!! Quote
Inactive User Posted February 20, 2011 Report Posted February 20, 2011 Great chapter. Loved it So sad Ruby lost the baby Liked the conversation between Charlie and Ava Update soon xx Quote
carywary Posted February 21, 2011 Report Posted February 21, 2011 Aw Ava is so adorable I suppose the whole dad thing was going to come up eventually but it was lovely. And I'm so pleased she got the pyjamas eventually and she'd learnt she could only have one thing! So sweet. Poor poor Ruby, I hope she'll be ok but she has a great family so if anyone can get through it she can. And she has Cal to keep her going. I thought you wrote that scene so well Danni, it seemed so realistic, like I was in the room. Well done, fabulous as always! Quote
Chester-Sam Posted February 22, 2011 Report Posted February 22, 2011 Poor Ruby! I hope she deals with it eventually, and Charlie knows what she's going through so she can help her :/ Charlie handled the Grant thing really well, Ava is such a smart girl Can't wait for the next installment, - Sam. Quote
Rach Loves H&A Posted February 22, 2011 Report Posted February 22, 2011 Great Update!! Poor Charlie having to answer questions about Grant to a child. Hope Ruby grieves properly soon and speaks to Charlie or Nicole about it. Looking forward to Chloe coming home so Charlie and Angelo can gave lovingly at her sleeping in her cot. Update Soon!!! Quote
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