charlie29 Posted July 28, 2010 Report Posted July 28, 2010 great updates! Glad Charlie decided to keep the baby, and that hopefully she will talk to Angelo about everything. Hope Charlie has just fainted or something - hope she'll be ok. Nice that Ruby has found a nice date!! More soon please Quote
twinkletoesjess Posted July 28, 2010 Author Report Posted July 28, 2010 (edited) I really loved that chapter. I loved the house hunting part with Angelo, Ava and Ben. It was so cute, bless Ava wanting the biggest bedroom. I loved that you showed us Angelo knowing things that a father should know about their children. I really loved the way Angelo explained that only he would be living there. I have a feeling Angelo telling Ava that Charlie will be living there one day will come back and bite him on the bottom. Jay seems like a nice guy, I loved the conversation between Charlie and Ruby in this chapter. I liked what ruby had to say about giving it time for charlie to be able to forgive angelo. Oooh wonder whats wrong with Charlie. You really are an awesome writer. I love reading your fics and I always look forward to your next update. (Hope you find what we were talking about the other day pretty soon.) Edited July 28, 2010 by twinkletoesjess Quote
Sabrina Posted July 29, 2010 Report Posted July 29, 2010 Great updates Danni! I finally caught up with all the ones I missed. Charlie and Ruby have such a great relationship - I love how they are so supportive of each other. I can't believe Angelo cheated on Charlie and then lied about it. I loved how Ruby slapped Shelly. I can't believe Charlie was going to have a termination to get back at Angelo. I'm glad she decided to keep the baby and that she is starting to feel something for him/her. Ava's so cute. Loved the conversation she had with Angelo about the High School Musical dolls. I hope Ruby and Jay's date goes well. He seems like a nice guy. Oh no! Poor Charlie. I hope she and the baby are ok. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
twinkletoesjess Posted July 31, 2010 Author Report Posted July 31, 2010 I really loved this chapter. I love that Angelo was so worried about Charlie and the baby, Im glad Ruby told Charlie that Angelo had a right to know what was happening, even though he is not Rubys favourite person at the moment she is willing to put that aside and do what she thinks is best. I hope Charlie starts eating properly again, she cant afford to keep fainting. I loved the conversation between Charlie and Rachel. Their conversation was perfect. Not only was Rachel a good friend and listened to her whilst comforting her she used what happened between her and Tony as a way of helping her realise what she wanted to do. Im really glad that Charlie had someone to talk to that could look at the situation from an outside point of view. I cant wait till your next update (Glad your getting there ) Quote
ashleyjane Posted July 31, 2010 Report Posted July 31, 2010 Great update hope charlie can forgive angelo soon they are such a great couple they deserve happiness and each other update soon because i love this fan fic Quote
callyha Posted July 31, 2010 Report Posted July 31, 2010 I loved that update! So sweet and touching. I'm glad Charlie and the baby are ok, and poor Angelo So glad Rachel talked to Charlie about her and Tony, hopefully that has helped. I loved it when Angelo said that he thinnks of Rubyas his own daughter, that was really sweet, you can see that he really is sorry for what he did! Hopefully Changelo work it out and move back in together! More soon please Danni. Its great! xx Quote
Inactive User Posted July 31, 2010 Report Posted July 31, 2010 Great chapter. Liked it. You wrote it really well. Update soon please xx Quote
Barbara Posted July 31, 2010 Report Posted July 31, 2010 I'm glad Charlie and the baby are fine. She'd better eat properly form now on. I'm glad Rachel made her see sense and Charlie will hopefully talk to Angelo. Rachel is right. They've been through so much already, it'd be stupid to throw it all away. More please. Quote
freckleface Posted July 31, 2010 Report Posted July 31, 2010 Lucky she only fainted. She should know better than to not eat! It's good Ruby called Anglo, he had a right to know what was going on :/ The talk with Rachel was really touching and hopefully Charlie may be able to forgive Angelo or at least talk to him. Fingers crossed they can get through this! Looking forward to the next update! Quote
charmed60 Posted July 31, 2010 Report Posted July 31, 2010 Fantastic chapter! I thought you worked Rachel's own experience into it really well and I'm pleased that Charlie's going to give Angelo another chance; as you say the good outweighs the bad. It's perfect Quote
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