tessalove Posted August 18, 2009 Report Posted August 18, 2009 That was soo good!! It was ad aswell, but it was a nice sad! Elainea xX Quote
lino Posted August 18, 2009 Report Posted August 18, 2009 I am speechless. Amazing story. I loved it. Quote
jdoddy Posted August 18, 2009 Report Posted August 18, 2009 Woah..just Woah! Awesome stuff, really well written - it was sad they couldn't be together :-( Quote
rocknroll Posted August 18, 2009 Report Posted August 18, 2009 that was FANTASTIC!!! great story - you showed the emotion so well and plus it was niff!! well done xx Quote
MizzyBee123 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Posted August 18, 2009 That was awesome!! loved it =] Quote
EmmaJane123 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Posted August 18, 2009 That was amazing! Great Story - U showed the emotion so well. Xxxxx Quote
Danni02 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Posted August 18, 2009 Wow that was just amazing. You really showed the emotion well. It was sad that Niff couldnt be together Quote
wee birdy Posted October 12, 2009 Report Posted October 12, 2009 so sad! so well written! usually r&j references **** me off but i really really liked this "That’s why I compare us to Romeo and Juliet. They loved each other more than life itself, but they couldn’t be together. Juliet sacrificed everything, hoping it would still be there when she awoke. Romeo was destined to life without her." it wasn't the atypical reference. good job! write more!! Quote
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