tessalove Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 That was soo good!! It was ad aswell, but it was a nice sad! Elainea xX Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lino Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 I am speechless. Amazing story. I loved it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Woah..just Woah! Awesome stuff, really well written - it was sad they couldn't be together :-( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 that was FANTASTIC!!! great story - you showed the emotion so well and plus it was niff!! well done xx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MizzyBee123 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 That was awesome!! loved it =] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmmaJane123 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 That was amazing! Great Story - U showed the emotion so well. Xxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicole+GeoffForever Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Lovelovelovelove this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni02 Posted August 18, 2009 Report Share Posted August 18, 2009 Wow that was just amazing. You really showed the emotion well. It was sad that Niff couldnt be together Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wee birdy Posted October 12, 2009 Report Share Posted October 12, 2009 so sad! so well written! usually r&j references **** me off but i really really liked this "That’s why I compare us to Romeo and Juliet. They loved each other more than life itself, but they couldn’t be together. Juliet sacrificed everything, hoping it would still be there when she awoke. Romeo was destined to life without her." it wasn't the atypical reference. good job! write more!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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