Lise Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 That was brilliant, as always. I don't really know what else to say. I really can't wait to see what's going to happen next so I think I'll leave it there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sephy Posted October 6, 2009 Report Share Posted October 6, 2009 Whoa. Just... Whoa! I dunno what else to say. This was 'it' then. I can't believe it. It was just so sudden and so sad. I loved every bit of it. All the scenes were brill but that ending... Wow! I agree with Red Ranger 1 when he said that he doesn't think Aden knows what he's done. Bless him. The way you wrote it made it so easy to understand and see Aden's POV on what he did, and I could almost feel his and Belle's pain. I think, that at the end, that Belle knew exactly what he did and I think she was happy with it? I really can't wait to see what'll happen next, now that Belle's dead. We know Aden doesn't get away with it, but everyone's reaction it will undoubtedly be great. Also, forgot to add, I loved the rounding of the chapter to the first one at the carnival with the teddy and candy floss. And Belle and Aden's banter was too good, especially about her painting his nails Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jodlebirger Posted October 23, 2009 Report Share Posted October 23, 2009 I like this fic, it's really good. I really hope you will finish it! I want to find out how Aden is going to react when he realize what he has done. And I wonder how the others are going to react, Irene, Geoff etc... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted October 24, 2009 Report Share Posted October 24, 2009 This fic is good like your other ones as well, I can't wait to see what happens next, please update sooon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted October 25, 2009 Report Share Posted October 25, 2009 Thanks for all the wonderful comments! It's great to hear that probably the most improtant chappie of this fic came across as good as it did I haven't forgetten this fic at all. I've began writing the next chapter, but hit a bit of a brick wall with it. But it's coming; don't worry! Thanks for the comments once again xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rokkafella125 Posted May 21, 2010 Report Share Posted May 21, 2010 Any chance of an Update soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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