Insecurity (by adellejefferiesxox) - comments

[nicoleee23]

wow! this was amazing, had me in a few tears! i loved it!!

keep up the amazing writing

[matticus01]

This was written beautifully Steph

Very well done, loved every second of it

the way you described Aden's pain, and Belle's for that matter made me want to cry, I loved it, you should be proud

[Lise]

That was really good. Love the conversation with Belle and Aden.

[adellejefferiesxox]

Thank you

[Jen]

Nice one-shot, Steph. I really like how you brought out Aden's fears and made them totally realistic. I liked the serious conversation in contrast to the more joking ending. Great job!

[adellejefferiesxox]

Awww thank you Jen, I love hearing what you have to say

Edited June 25, 2009 by Lily-G

[John]

Sorry I haven't read this earlier. It's very well written with a great command of the characters and conversations. You really have portrayed the complicated feelings involved very well.

I know you'll throw something at me but you really need to expend your range of characters to include many others. Maybe when the current very emotional Belle/Aden storyline concludes??

[adellejefferiesxox]

I know you'll throw something at me but you really need to expend your range of characters to include many others. Maybe when the current very emotional Belle/Aden storyline concludes??

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know Belle and Aden's characters so well though When I write I feeling and picturing how they would react if they were put into the situation. I do know Geoff and Nicole's characters quite well so who knows maybe they'll be my next victims of fan ficition

Thanks for reading John