nicoleee23 Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 wow! this was amazing, had me in a few tears! i loved it!! keep up the amazing writing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted June 24, 2009 Report Share Posted June 24, 2009 This was written beautifully Steph Very well done, loved every second of it the way you described Aden's pain, and Belle's for that matter made me want to cry, I loved it, you should be proud Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 That was really good. Love the conversation with Belle and Aden. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Nice one-shot, Steph. I really like how you brought out Aden's fears and made them totally realistic. I liked the serious conversation in contrast to the more joking ending. Great job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 (edited) Awww thank you Jen, I love hearing what you have to say Edited June 25, 2009 by Lily-G Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 Sorry I haven't read this earlier. It's very well written with a great command of the characters and conversations. You really have portrayed the complicated feelings involved very well. I know you'll throw something at me but you really need to expend your range of characters to include many others. Maybe when the current very emotional Belle/Aden storyline concludes?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adellejefferiesxox Posted June 25, 2009 Report Share Posted June 25, 2009 I know you'll throw something at me but you really need to expend your range of characters to include many others. Maybe when the current very emotional Belle/Aden storyline concludes?? !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know Belle and Aden's characters so well though When I write I feeling and picturing how they would react if they were put into the situation. I do know Geoff and Nicole's characters quite well so who knows maybe they'll be my next victims of fan ficition Thanks for reading John Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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