The_Hunters_Rock_My_World Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 Story Title: The summer bay strangler Type of story: long storyline arc Main Characters: the characters of 2009 season BTTB rating: T Genre: drama Does story include spoilers: No, but if it does I'll edited it out Any warnings: Violence:medium Summary: someone is murdered but the killer remains unkown, can the bay catch the killer before he/she strikes again? find out who the killer is in this chilling fan fic. Main characters (Aussie I won't add your new current characters until they both arrive on UK and NZ screens) Tony Jack Alf Bridget Leah Ruby Charlie Angelo Miles Kirsty Kane Roman Geoff Annie Belle Irene Aden Colleen Martha Jai Meldoy Nicole Rachel The first part is short as it a lead up to the first murder Last year summer bay was horrified to see the body of a pretty lady in her 20's dead in a skip bin. 2009. Jack,Charlie,Angelo are dissucing about the murder case but decides to name 3 suspects 1.Roman 2.Aden 3.Bridget Irene's place Irene is kissing an unkown guy but distrub by Geoff and Nicole Geoff: Irene what are you doing?? Irene: Umm nothing, gotta go Geoff: Ok, have fun Geoff bedroom Nicole: Now that's weird, who was the guy? Geoff: Who knows? the killer and wait she did date a killer named Barry hyde Nicole: Right and that happened 2/3 years ago They both hug. Next day Colleen puts the bags in the bin where she opens and screms It's Bridget. Bridget is dead, who is next on the list? A letter is sent to Roman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 oooo this sounds good! Looking forward to reading more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 Good start. I hope we get some clues soon or something along that line. And who was that guy Irene was with?! xoxo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Hunters_Rock_My_World Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 I can't say much but I am sure you'll find out soon also he is a mystery guy that Irene dates last year but he is not who you think he is! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Hunters_Rock_My_World Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 Next part Everyone in the town has been gossiping about the lastest murder, but there's one thing on the killer's mind there's a little drawing on his/her whiteboard and circles Roman. Roman's house he opens his letter and looks in shock 'To be a loyal father he must fill some graves' Romans starts thinking who could it possible be?? Roman: Ahh Ethan Belle & Aden house Belle: I am going to get some food Aden: Sure Belle: See you when I get back Belle walks out Summer bay house. Miles thanks Colleen for looking after Ollie Miles: Come anytime Colleen Colleen: Oh yes I will Colleen walks off Outside supermarket Belle hears noise but insteed she goes in her car. The next day. Kane is about to put rubbish out for the rubbish truck but then he sees a body!! Who body is it? Roman? Belle? Aden? Colleen? Irene mystery man is revealed! Tony, Rachel, Leah, Irene, Alf are all on the killer hit list! who will be next? or could be someone else at the wrong time? In the next 3 updates New characters arrives Irene's mystery man is hiding a dark serect! what could it be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symphony Posted January 16, 2009 Report Share Posted January 16, 2009 I like the way you tell us their whereabouts - that's all very nicely done! Would love some more details about their actions / descriptions of what they're doing, etc - but other than that, you're developing the storyline nicely! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Hunters_Rock_My_World Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Thanks, and their actions / descriptions will be part of their own flashbacks but that will happen once the killer is revealed so you guys may have to wait LOL! don't forget to put the clues together because it leads up to the killer identiy! (sp) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAURZY! Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Oh i missed an update!!! I dont want Belle, Aden or Roman to die I'm useless at picking up clues lol so i'll just wait for the big reveal!! ooo im intrigued to see who Irene's mystery man is! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Hunters_Rock_My_World Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 You will find out in the next update be sure to find out at the end of the next update but also it will be about Irene and how she knows the mystery guy but he is part of the killer storyline? so No one knows what to happen next? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Hunters_Rock_My_World Posted January 19, 2009 Report Share Posted January 19, 2009 This part will be a bit yuck so therfore it's PGR (Parental Guided recommened) Ok the long awatied part is now up and it should desereve a big shocking opener. We see Kane looking at the body, revealing to be Colleen! Irene's house Irene opens the door to her mystery man, reveling to be no other than Barry Hyde!! It seems the killer like killing older ladies! but why? The Park As VJ & Ollie are at the park with Leah until VJ screams and runs to leah VJ: Mummy there's a liber (He can't say Liver very well) Leah: A what??? Ollie: Come Ollie & VJ take Leah to the place where they found the Liver Leah: Yuck! Ok you two just don't touch it! Leah rings 111 Irene's place Irene: Barry once Geoff knows who you are he is going to make you pay!! Barry: It's ok, I'll leave anyway Irene: Right flashback, 2006 Barry: I am sorry I did this but he was taking over this town Irene: I don't care you can rot in hell flashfoward, 2009 Barry: You know Bridget? Irene: Yeah she is a cow Barry: You got that right Irene: Why? Barry: She is my ex-wife, whoever killed her I am happy Irene: You make me sick! you kill women for hurting you? Barry: No of course not The Killer is stalking around Irene's but without a flash of I.V tubing the killer strangles Charlie!! Next day Rachel walks out her house and throw the bag in the bin until she screams! Charlie body, Charlie opens her eyes The killer has strike again, but will Charlie survive or does she dies before the ambulance arrive?? Barry is suspected of killing Bridget & Colleen, but will they find edvince or will another murder occur? In part 8 a all-time fave will die at the hands of the summer bay strangler? who is it? Miles or Jack?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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