Regrets (by Jacksthehottest) - comments

[matticus01]

that was so beautiful

I was hooked formt he moment I started reading . . .

well done . . .

I cant pick a favourite part becaue I loved every single bit of it . . .

I love your writing

[KaitieL]

Tear, tear. That was so beautiful. Now if only that happened on the show and then we wouldn't have to had to deal with the whole Sam crap.

Well done, I loved it.

[Zetti]

I loved it especially the last line, the one shot is very powerful

[Barbara]

Great one shot! It was very emotional.

This is what should have happened on the show!

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He walked over to her and once he reached her he wrapped his hands around her waist from the back before pulling her into him, he buried his head into her hair, it felt so good having her so close to him, it hadn’t been like this for a while.

Lucky for Martha she had finally got her answer, she turned around and before Jack knew it she had wrapped her arms around his neck strongly holding on for dear life as she buried her head in his neck.

Jack finally reacted to what had just happened, he wrapped his arms around her pulling her in closer, as he slowly picked her up, he could feel her tears on his neck, but right now he didn’t care.

“I love you so much” Martha managed to say through her tears. He finally placed her on the ground as he cupped her face.

Looking at her eyes as they sparkled from all the tears, he couldn’t help but let out the words as well.

“I love you too” he smiled, causing her to smile in response.

That was my favourite part.

I'm looking forward to read your next fic / one shot!

[Tasha]

awww...if only that how it happened on the show, then we wouldnt have to go through all this baby drama And Sam would never have come back

Great one-shot though

[jack+martha=trooluvv]

Barbara you took my favourite part so I couldn't quote it

I loved it. Hope to read more from you soon