matty and luke forever Posted June 16, 2007 Report Share Posted June 16, 2007 Story Title: The Beauty of Love Type of story: Long fiction. Main Characters: Matilda mainly, Ric involved and others BTTB rating: G Genre: Drama/Romance Does story include spoilers: No Any warnings: Possibly some coarse language (undecided) Summary: After leaving the Bay, Matilda returns 9 years later with her husband Gregg Lang. Is Gregg the one she truly loves? Ok so I had some inspiration today and decided to start writing a new fic I really hope you guys like this one as it is quite different to what I usually write and I'm really nervous about how the response is lol So please R&R and any constructive criticism is welcome Chapter 1 xxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HeavenForbid Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 You seriously have nothing to worry about That was an amazing start! I really liked it! You used very vivid descriptions Excellent! Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liska Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 I liked that first chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Your descriptions are very good. And I can see Matilda as Julie cooper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matty and luke forever Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 Thanks guys There will be a new update next weekend maybe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sazcaz89 Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 that was a really good start. i can't wait for more update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heidikri Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 Great start. I like your descriptions. Looking forward to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted June 17, 2007 Report Share Posted June 17, 2007 Hey matty and luke forever, I've added the Topic Description in your Subtitle so People will know if it's something they would like to read or not. Please also do this with your future Fics. Thanks, -Kirst- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matty and luke forever Posted June 18, 2007 Report Share Posted June 18, 2007 ^Ok dokes Sorry about that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted June 18, 2007 Report Share Posted June 18, 2007 Really great start, and interesting idea for a fic I can picture Matilda as a lonely rich wife. Cant wait to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matty and luke forever Posted June 23, 2007 Report Share Posted June 23, 2007 Thanks Guys Here's the next chapter Chapter 2 R&R Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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