The Beauty of Love

[matty and luke forever]

Story Title: The Beauty of Love

Type of story: Long fiction.

Main Characters: Matilda mainly, Ric involved and others

BTTB rating: G

Genre: Drama/Romance

Does story include spoilers: No

Any warnings: Possibly some coarse language (undecided)

Summary: After leaving the Bay, Matilda returns 9 years later with her husband Gregg Lang. Is Gregg the one she truly loves?

Ok so I had some inspiration today and decided to start writing a new fic I really hope you guys like this one as it is quite different to what I usually write and I'm really nervous about how the response is lol So please R&R and any constructive criticism is welcome

Chapter 1

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[HeavenForbid]

You seriously have nothing to worry about

That was an amazing start!

I really liked it!

You used very vivid descriptions

Excellent!

Update soon

[Liska]

I liked that first chapter. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Your descriptions are very good. And I can see Matilda as Julie cooper

[matty and luke forever]

Thanks guys There will be a new update next weekend maybe

[sazcaz89]

that was a really good start. i can't wait for more

update soon

[heidikri]

Great start. I like your descriptions.

Looking forward to read more.

[Cerise]

Hey matty and luke forever,

I've added the Topic Description in your Subtitle so People will know if it's something they would like to read or not. Please also do this with your future Fics.

Thanks,

-Kirst-

[matty and luke forever]

^Ok dokes Sorry about that

[tasha7905]

Really great start, and interesting idea for a fic I can picture Matilda as a lonely rich wife. Cant wait to read more.

[matty and luke forever]

Thanks Guys

Here's the next chapter

Chapter 2

R&R