Destiny Posted February 8, 2006 Report Posted February 8, 2006 (edited) That was an excellent story. I am devastated that you didn't give it a happy ending but then that's a good thing since it is testimony to your writing. Edited April 20, 2007 by Nicom Quote
prancer Posted February 8, 2006 Report Posted February 8, 2006 i can not that you killed marther and jack in that stroy, first i liked it but then when i read the end i could not believe it. you should wright another story, but this time not one person in the bay should die. MARTHA AND JACK 4EVER Quote
tasha7905 Posted February 8, 2006 Report Posted February 8, 2006 That's a brilliant story, I like how you didnt make it the cliche happy ending that most stories have, although I do like Martha and Jack, it was nice to have a different perspective of their relationship. Great writing Quote
rising-flame Posted February 8, 2006 Report Posted February 8, 2006 You gotta feel sorry for them. Great story Quote
dolly-999 Posted February 8, 2006 Report Posted February 8, 2006 Thanks guys. I wrote this on Home and away central and Fanfiction.net a while ago, I've got other stories there that I haven't finnished yet too. Should I post them here as well? Quote
Sal_gurl Posted February 12, 2006 Report Posted February 12, 2006 Omg that so good u should post more stories Quote
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