beckyboo Posted September 12, 2006 Report Posted September 12, 2006 (edited) LAura You now this made me cry on MSN and i read it again on here and now im on floods of tears!!!!!!!!! Hes looking at me saying omg get a grip woman!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But no being honest this is amaizng!!!!!!!!!!! Laura i was glad to proof read it for you!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Edited September 12, 2006 by beckyboo Quote
xsianx Posted September 12, 2006 Report Posted September 12, 2006 Aww! i'm upset now! lol Very good writing though. Well done Quote
puja Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 So good! Poor Jack; why must that guy always suffer. Bless him! Great start, please update! Quote
marthajacklover Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 (edited) Oh my god that was brilliant, i actually cried whilst reading it, well done!! Edited September 13, 2006 by marthajacklover Quote
xxgulcanxx Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 I can't stop crying now. That was the most emotional fic i've read in my entire life! please update soon Quote
xGlowingAngelx Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 OMG That was so emotional. Poor Jack. awww . The video thing was a lovely touch, and I loved the trail, ending at the cliff. It was perfect. Well done! Quote
Jack and Martha 4eva Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was crying when I read this, and you said that you're not a very good writer. Yer course you're not. LOL The video was so nice, and just made me cry more. I hate it when Martha or Jack die in fics. It's just so sad. But then I'm kind of doing that in my own fic. O wells. LOL. I'm sure that I'll get over it. I would usually put now update soon, but it's a one shot, so I won't. I'll just ramble instead. LOL Great writing hunni. Em xx Quote
shawtyy Posted September 13, 2006 Report Posted September 13, 2006 That was such an emotional chapter. This made me cry! Quote
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