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"What about Jeremy Olsen? If he was willing to set up the factory and break into Sally's…" Tracey suggested, flipping her hair back out of her face, making Peter's heart skip a beat.

Tracey's hair flips :wub: Dang, why didn't Jack and Martha just die or something? Why is it that people want to keep them alive? :P

I loed it heaps, Rabs! Especially the part where Zoe just goads at Peter. It's so darn hot!

Update soon! :D

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I can definitely see this being one of your best works up there with Girl Next Door - I freakin' love it! Seriously can't wait for more, wicked stuff Rabs! :D
:blink: As good as Girl Next Door? Wow, there's no pressure there at all. :lol:

Thanks for the feedback everyone, it's much appreciated. Anyone want to take a guess at what's going to happen? :P

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