swfc Posted September 27, 2006 Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 "What about Jeremy Olsen? If he was willing to set up the factory and break into Sally's…" Tracey suggested, flipping her hair back out of her face, making Peter's heart skip a beat. Tracey's hair flips Dang, why didn't Jack and Martha just die or something? Why is it that people want to keep them alive? I loed it heaps, Rabs! Especially the part where Zoe just goads at Peter. It's so darn hot! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_Lewis Posted September 27, 2006 Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 That was beautiful =D cant wait for more =p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted September 27, 2006 Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 I can definitely see this being one of your best works up there with Girl Next Door - I freakin' love it! Seriously can't wait for more, wicked stuff Rabs! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-michelle- Posted September 27, 2006 Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 Great start. Please update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckyrabbit Posted September 27, 2006 Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 I can definitely see this being one of your best works up there with Girl Next Door - I freakin' love it! Seriously can't wait for more, wicked stuff Rabs! As good as Girl Next Door? Wow, there's no pressure there at all. Thanks for the feedback everyone, it's much appreciated. Anyone want to take a guess at what's going to happen? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted September 27, 2006 Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 lol. It's seriously one of your bests! Let me guess... I have a feeling Tracey's involved, but I'm also convinced there really is a copycat killer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckyrabbit Posted September 27, 2006 Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 If it is a copycat, who do you think it'll be? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted September 27, 2006 Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 What a filthy tease! Erm, is it someone who's been linked to the stalker storyline previously or just a random fangirl/boy? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckyrabbit Posted September 27, 2006 Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 They're linked...in a way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted September 27, 2006 Report Share Posted September 27, 2006 Damn! *scratches head for a second before sitting on the ground with my legs crossed* I feel it's time for some detective work. Is Claire Brody involved? I got a feeling it's someone on the inside. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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