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"Ummm...Ric I think we should go now"Matilda told me

"Yeah, before it piles up to much."I laughed

I walk over to the door and tried to open it...it would not open!

"Hurry up Ric!!"Matilda exclaimed

"It wont budge!!!"I yelled back

"What do you mean it wont budge!"Said Irene as she tried to open it.

"Oh No!"Cried Matilda

"Hey Matilda, don't worry we can phone someone to unblock it"I said hugging her

I walked over to the phone as lots of other people were trying to get the door to open

I picked the phone up and put it to my ear

BEEEEEEPppppppp It went dead

"The phone lines are down"I screamed

"Calm down Ric"Cassie said (where she came from I would never know)

"Fine I will"I replied

"Ric HELP!!!!!!!!!!"I heard Matilda scream

I turned around and saw matilda covered in broken tiles, snow and metal along with lots of other people.

"OMG! Matilda I'm Coming"I said

I ran across the diner and started to pick up all the stuff which was crushing Matilda.

I managed to get most off when Matilda started to cry

"Ric I love you so much"She said

"Hey you aren't leaving me yet."I replied

She didn't hear me as she had gone to a deep sleep never to wake up again.

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Hi rebeccaismename.

In line with the new rules for fanfictions I have made some changes to the first post in your story, see here. I'd appreciate it if you'd take five minutes to make the necessary changes and PM me with any problems/difficulties/questions or post them in this thread.

Thanks.

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