I Want You To Want Me... (Unfinished Business) (by SfanS) - comments

[Skykat]

That was a great story. Now it's not in the challenge thread I don't have to be critical and can actually appreciate it as a story. Like ILM and Jade, I was amazed that this story was written by somebody so young. The writing is excellent, some really good stuff. You have a lot of potential. Well done!xx

PS. I edited your title so that people who read it in the challenge will know which story it was, hope you don't mind.

Edited December 18, 2006 by Skykat

[SfanS]

^^ Thanks Kat!!!! (For your comments AND changing the topic)

(And ILM and Jade, thanked you before, now I'll thank you again!)

[Skykat]

Moved to the library while I'm having a tidy up.

Edited December 21, 2006 by Skykat