Burn For You (by emmasi) - comments

[Guest]

That was great and poor Lucas please don't end it so great.

[Jackieleanne]

That was brilliant Emmasi great oneshot I loved it.

[puja]

That was fantastic! Brilliantly written and utterly gripping stuff.

The whole situation was intense and the writing was so good, I could actually imagine it all happening! You should definetly write some more fics!

Great stuff

[emmasi]

Thanks guys

I just wanted to bump this one tinsy little time cause I thought it was pretty good, lol. Yeah, I'm a try hard

[tasha7905]

Glad you did bump it, other wise I may not have got to read it. It is fantastic, you have captured the intensity of the scene perfectly as well as still having the emotions between the characters. It was good to see both sides of Lucas's character. Well done really great writing. xx

[emmasi]

Thanks for that tash. Notice how I bumped it while you were in the forum ??

[katie343]

Wow that was excellent Great work!

[bella]

Woah...I was not expecting that at all. But then, that's what makes it so great. Gripping stuff, I read it right through..I know it was a one-shot but still, I had to read it all.

Excellent work. *rubs hands together ala Mr Burns style...no pun intended*