Tasha Posted September 1, 2006 Report Share Posted September 1, 2006 What happened with Jesse?? You fully skipped that part Great chapter though. Im glad SuperJack saved the day as alwayz. Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Home and Away Always!!! Posted September 1, 2006 Report Share Posted September 1, 2006 Cool story, you write so well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Angel~ Posted September 8, 2006 Report Share Posted September 8, 2006 Sorry I took so long... I'm writing 2 other fics and going to school so it's really hard to keep organized. Chapter 25 “I’m so proud of you!” Martha said kissing as much of Jack’s face as she could manage. “Hi,” Jessie interrupted her. “Hi,” she said. “I found this article in an old newspaper,” Jessie said, handing Jack a newspaper cut out. It was the story about the chambers girl. Jack looked at it uncomfortably. “So, you killed someone,” Jessie said. “Like you haven’t!” Martha said, sarcastically. She stood up to face him, Jack grabbed Martha’s arm. “Martha, No! Leave it!” Jack said. “You nearly killed me too!” she continued, shaking her arm to be freed from Jack’s grip. “How many times have you two broken up?” Jessie said. “You…” Martha began. She had her hands ready to punch him but Jack picked her up and brought her outside. *** Jack and Martha were sitting eating dinner. Jack poked his dinner with his fork. “He’s got that Chamber’s girl into your head hasn’t he?” Martha said. “I would change the past if I could but I can’t,” Jack said. “Forget the past!” Martha said. “How can I?” Jack said. “You can, she shouldn’t have been messing around with the hottest guy anyway,” Martha said. “I love you,” “I love you too,” Jack smiled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted September 8, 2006 Report Share Posted September 8, 2006 Hey This is amazin post more on M&J soon lol!!!!!!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tasha7905 Posted September 8, 2006 Report Share Posted September 8, 2006 Great update. I cant wait for more. Jesse is so out of order. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxgulcanxx Posted September 8, 2006 Report Share Posted September 8, 2006 That was a great chapter update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jasminka_13 Posted September 9, 2006 Report Share Posted September 9, 2006 Great chapter, Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
M&J 4eva Posted September 9, 2006 Report Share Posted September 9, 2006 Awwww cute Go away Jesse great chapter please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted September 9, 2006 Report Share Posted September 9, 2006 What is Jesse's problem. Kah! That was so out of order. Hypocryte (sp?) Well Jack shouldnt let him get to his head. And Martha is the best I wish she did punch Jesse Great chapter Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Angel~ Posted September 11, 2006 Report Share Posted September 11, 2006 Next chapter, Enjoy! Chapter 26 Matilda sat on the beach, making a circle in the sand with her finger. “Hi,” said a guy. “Hi,” she said. “I saw you sitting here alone and thought I’d offer you some company,” he said. “I’m Dean.” “I’m Matilda, but you can call me Mattie for short,” said Matilda. “Do you live around here?” Dean asked. “Yeah, do you?” Matilda said. “Moved here yesterday,” Dean said. “So that’s why I haven’t seen you around,” Matilda said. “I would ask you out but someone like you would probably already be dating someone else,” said Dean. “I’m not dating anyone at the moment,” Matilda smiled. “Then would you like to go out with me?” Dean asked. “That’d be great,” Matilda said. “Cool…” Dean said. Ric and Lucas watched from a distance. Ric was sure he saw a hint of green in Lucas’s eyes. *** Lucas walked up to Lee and tapped her on the shoulder. “How are you?” Lucas asked. “Why?” Lee asked. “I thought you’d be angry with me over the Matilda thing, sorry about that…I couldn’t stop myself.” “Me and Matilda have broken up,” Lucas said. “I’m so sorry,” Lee said. “It’s because of me, isn’t it?” “No it’s not!” Lucas assured her. “What’s the problem then?” Lee asked. “Nothing,” Lucas muttered. “I shouldn’t be asking, none of my business,” Lee said. “You’ve seen her with another guy, haven’t you?” Lucas nodded miserably. “Don’t you think she goes through boyfriends a bit fast…” Lee wondered out loud. “You go out with someone else, see how she likes it,” Lucas looked at her, thoughtful. “You’re right,” he said. He kissed Lee on the lips. “What was that for?” Lee asked, wiping her mouth. “For being such a good friend,” Lucas replied. “Does this mean I’m the person you’re going to date?” Lee asked, hopefully. Lucas nodded. Lee kissed his cheek. “I’m in!” she said. Matilda walked down the path and saw Lucas kissing Lee and she felt her world crumbling down around her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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