kayla

let me get this straight....some crazy girl turns up and tells jack that hes the father of her baby.......and he just believes it??!!! hello! paternity test!!!!!!!

although the story is AMAZING!!!, i must say that im way more impressed by ur writing skills, nicole! i really hope u release a book (about jack and martha obviously) at some point in ur life!!! lol

hahahaha! brilliant! that really made me laugh! im loving the sexual tension between martha and jack that u just no is going to explode soon!!!!!

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! i cant handle long periods between updates! lol my brain is goin to explode.........

was just catching up on that and it was just as amazing as ever!!!!! i hope jack tells martha to **** off when shecomes crawling back! dont get me wrong, i love jack and martha (obviously) and i want them to get back together but i just think jack should make her suffer for a while cos she makes him suffer ALL THE TIME!! does that make sense??!! lol hope u update soon nicole

i'm sensing a tasha/jonah type relationship forming! (except without the mental cult and the mother-in-law from hell) dont do it martha!!! run fast in the opposite direction!!!!!!!!!!!

phew! it's a good thing i no you're not silly enough to kill jack *hint hint* or else i may have started to worry! please update soon so i can breathe a little easier!!

jack really should avoid undercover missions cos they never seem to work out well 4 him! lol hope u post more soon

it odesnt mean u can go and get a big head though! lol yeah fair enough u may be the best writer in lyk the whole world but dont go getn all full of urself! lol

dude ur fics honestly r the best ive read! all the rest are usually boring: martha and jack have a fight, martha goes out with corey, martha and jack get back together blah, blah, blah! ur's are really original (although i do wonder what goes on in ur head to think up trevor and his mental ideas about catching angels! lol) and i think u've got the martha and jack hate/love realationship spot on! cant wait 4 the next one! (and personally i must say i love undercover cop 3 for the title! its really unique! lol)

aww that was sooo cute! just jack and martha reminiscing about good times! i've been sick 4 a few days and have just caught up with the goings on of the fic and its still just as amazing!! there's been so many developments and im so glad im better so i can catch up!! yaaayy!!!!!

lol! alf does have a mobile though cos i remember being shocked when i saw he had one! although to be fair he didnt have a clue how to use it! lol bet u he has the crazy frog as his ringtone! how funny would that be??! oh i just had a serious brainwave!!!!! *light bulb lights above head* u should be able to get ringtones of alf saying "flamin' galla's", or even colleen saying "yoohoo only me" now that would be sooo cool! lol (sorry, i do realise that i just went into one about complete randomness! i can help it, it just happens. alot.)

well if ur gonna get all technical then yeah, i suppose, but come on! a quick text while peter wasnt lookn wouldnt be askn 2 much! lol althogh they might all think its just a sick joke........ *trails off into deep thought*

wouldn't u think that jack would bother his arse to fone alf, tasha etc. and tell them that martha was alive! lol. it's all me, me, me with him! (love u really jack!!) lol next chapter asap please!

i thought u wer only joking about bumping martha off?!!! lol lovin' it as usual! :-)

ah ur killing me here!! i'm really nosey and impatient and i cant wait to find out! lol so does "hmmm....lol" mean that my theory was right???!!!! go on give me just one little clue?!! plzzzzzzzzz

ooooohhh! i cant wait for the next chapter to find out if she really is pregnant! it cant be dave's cos she was a "christian" with him! or maybe she's just lying to jack

wow this just keeps on getting better! i actually had butterflies in my stomach during those last 2 chapters! i cant wait 4 the next one, it sounds soooo good.... please put it up soon!!!!!!!

u have an amazing way with words!! love that u had colleen interrupting them! lol. it wouldve been sooo funy if she had walked in and caught them at it! anyway keep on writing! ur so damn good at it!

that is really great. keep up the good work!!!! u really are a good writer and im getting soo drawn in to the story! just thought id show some appreciation for all ur hard work! keep writing!

yeah keep goin its excellent!!!! i sooooo hope that jack makes it back for her birthday!!!!!!