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Poor Serena... and Dylan that was such a sad question i can so imagine a little kid in the same situation asking that Awww... This is fantastic hope to read more soon!!

YAY!! You did a sequel!! Loving it so far Cant wait to read the next chapter!!

Awesome chapter!! At least Martha now no's what Callums really like.. I hope Her and Jack are gonna be ok.. update again soon!

Thats just mean to leave it there Callum you had better start running... a lot of angry people are after you....Please please update really soon i wanna no if Jacks gonna be ok... I love this fic its soooo good!!!

You cant leave it there!!!!!!!!!! Thats just mean!!! WOW i always thought Callum was nutters now hes that plus a physco plus a lot of other not very nice things... Please update again soon!!!!

OMG i am crying... That was beautifully written. I cant think of anything to say to tell you just how good that story was. I didnt expect that ending, i thought they would just live happily ever after. How wrong i was. Thank you for writing that i loved it even though it made me cry.

Aww thats so sad DAMN YOU CALLUM. I really hate callum right now. Poor Jack.... Im so sad for them right now....Please update again soon

Callum just leave them alone..... This is sooo good!! It made me smile (except when callum left a messge and interupted them:P) Happy Birthday for tomorrow as well!!

Happy Birthday!! And goodluck for your exams!

Fantastic! Im glad there not fighting anymore!!

That was awesome!! Starting to not like Megan she seems sus...wondering what Marthas secret is aswell?? Cant wait to read the next chapter!

WOW so was not expecting her to have cancer!!!! I am shocked... but it was fantastic! Cant wait to read the last chapter!

YAY ive been waiting for this to be posted and now it has!!!!!! Fantastic start! Hope to read more soon!!

They were great chapters. Callum and Jack seem to be getting on well.

This is fantastic, you are a really good writer. Please update again soon.

Jack has to go and save Martha.... Great chapter!!

^^ LOL if you need any help with the beating sticks just let me no. This is sooo good!!

That was a great ending!! Im sad its over but im really glad your writing another fic so i cant wait to read it!!

NOOOO Callums back.... Really loving this story though lol

This is such a great story!! Im addicted to it (and all the other jack and martha ones lol ) I hope Jack can come to the rescue!

I hope Jack's ok. Great chapter!!

Say something Jack...... lol. That was a really great chapter!!

That was the best ending!!!! Made me very happy!!! Hope you write more fics as your a fab writer.

Thats a sign for Martha!!!! Go Luke for spotting the tatoo!!! This is soo good please update again really really soon!!

Ive just read all of the chapters its fantastic!! Please update again soon.