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Thanks for updating! Really fun chapter and loved little Aria winning with her uncle Heath and their stare off Enjoyed Charlie and Bianca as well and looking forward to birthdays and valentines... Enjoy this story loads so looking forward to future updates when you have the time. Many thanks for sharing

Fantastic chapter! Absolutely loved all the emotion and feeling you portrayed between Brax and Charlie. Really glad she stayed at the funeral to support him as Bianca had encouraged her in earlier update. Great small steps they are making and like the interaction of the hug and rubbing arms...shows that they are testing and building boundaries back. Hope Jacob warms to him again and Brax can be hopeful when he leaves for rehab... Ruby and her 'friends with benefits' I'm sure will get complicated quickly but its good humour and glad she happy again. Really hope Charlie and Brax continue to take it slow and are open and honest with one another so we can enjoy more of their relationship getting back on track and better, Loved writing! Thanks

Proper tragic with Jacob being scared of his Daddy! Hope that this passes quickly and Brax can build his relationship and trust back with both Charlie and Jacob. I do feel for him as he's being a proper bloke and shutting himself down and just wanting to forget with the drinking but he said earlier he didn't want to be like his dad and sadly he's begun to be like that as has his little family scared and unsure of him... Hope that he does come by the house and not in a paraletic state... Was surprised at Ruby jumping in there with Matt and interested to see how that develops. Excited for next update!! Thank you so much!!

Very well written and emotional! Bless Brax...properly broken man Thank you for sharing

Such beautiful fab writing! Love this story...Brax and Charlie are really there for eachother and you continue to portray the emotions really well. Thanks so much for sharing. Heaths humour continues to be spot on and entertaining... Looking forward to next update

Really fab chapter! Felt sad for Tegan...she's not had the easiest of lives but very sweet of her entrusting Charlie. Glad that Charlie and Brax are working it out...such good writing. Always look forward to your updates. Thanks so much

Amazing update! Such beautiful writing and really emotional. I was proud of Charlie for telling Brax he had to leave at the beginning and do feel for both of them but Brax really needs to sort himself out. Laughed out loud at Ruby! That was very creative and entertaining...go Ruby! hahaha Tragic at the end with Brax begging but maybe he will wake up to himself a bit focus on dealing with his feelings for Casey and be the better person towards Charlie and the kids. Looking forward to more

Just logging in quickly so that I can comment on all that I've caught up on. Crazy week... Love your story and writing!! You update so frequently and I'm sure that I'm not the only one who is very grateful. Glad that Ruby is getting supported by her mate and that at present it seems that he is just being friendly and not pushy which is nice. Really feel for both Brax and Charlie but seriously Brax has been properly harsh and rude to Charlie and the drinking...you have got me concerned with that especially at little Jacob seeming to be scared of his Daddy Hoping that looking after the girls wakes him up a little to the situation and he actually softens and he and Charlie talk...Please don't have him cause injury to the girls....think Charlie would walk if he did. Love writing though - Thank you so much

Danni I beg you...Please!! Don't of had them get the jiggy on... I like that Brax and Bianca are buddies and can talk abouit cheaters but that would completely devastate Charlie and they have enough relationship stuff to work through. Your writing is fab and I love it...I literally have knots hoping that you're not going that route.. Please no Can't get past cheaters Nice to have Ruby still around and you can sense her worry for her Mum and Brax. Hope that Chax can start talking to eachother and both give support thats needed. Can't wait for next update

Really liked this chapter and how you shared both their feelings and reasons why they are wanting different things. Please don't have Brax sleep with Bianca That would be so wrong and tragic and don't see them getting past that. Them being mates and chatting is fine but nought more please I didn't really think that like other commenters and liked that Brax was just sharing his frustrations and asking her to talk to Charlie tofind out if its something else but am now a little concerned... They need to have some quality time together and be open and communicate. Please no cheaters! Love the writing

Love this story Danni!! Completely fab! There is so much in it and you continue to keep me excited and engaged to read each update. Jacob being the helper was too cute and really well written...great conversations between characters...Charlie & Ruby, Brax & Bianca, love it! Sad that Casey has died and worried for outcome now but excited all the same for where you take the story. Please don't feel pressure to update...am just so grateful that you take the time and share. Thanks

So pleased you updated and loved it! Worried about Chax though! Charlie should really be honest with Brax. I understand her wanting to help Tegan but can equally see why Brax will now be upset and feel betrayed... Hope that they can work it through and Brax will let her explain. Really looking forward to next update - great writing! Thanks

Beautiful!! Loved last few updates...Amazing interaction and play between Ruby and Jacob and relationships have been portrayed so well! Loved catching up... Brilliant story and liked Ruby being around. Could see the break up with Xavier coming and sad for both but looking forward Rubys story too.... Colleen...guessing its her who has blabbed to the press. Hope Charlie gives her what for, being all protective of Ruby..or maybe even Brax?? Hope someone gives her a telling off though. Thanks so much for updates!

Great couple of updates! Loving Charlie in Mummy mode...bless her and love Jacob making sure he's still getting time alone too. Brilliant writing...Brax trying to get Charlie out of the house and giving her support about her body changes is gorgeous!! Glad they are getting a date! Ruby...that is getting very moody...Xavier is being harsh as well trying to make her choose but can't see this turning out well. Can't wait for next update! Thanks so much!!

Loved update! So enjoy your writing and the story! Love that they are getting into the routine and I love Chax and the kids! Hope that Charlies appointment goes well and shes healing well. Also that Riley is ok. Really nicely written and loved Charlie sticking up for Brax to Colleen...she's so interfering but funny! You described her nosiness very well! Can see Ruby and Xavier drifting further apart quickly...feel for him and can't see him carrying on waiting for her to give him some time much longer without them having some serious words. Thanks as ever! Looking forward to more!

Really glad you updated! Aaahhhhh poor Charlie making a joke about Tegan being pregnant and it actually being true! Felt sorry for her freaking out and then running out the house...BUT...hello!! Not like Brax planned it and he was in a relationship with Tegan not knowing anything about Olivia so think its a shock to him too and he immediately wanted to go and talk to Charlie about it... Think he needs to get a break from Charlie...know its not a good situation and would be pretty gutting on Charlie but still a bubba and Brax loves his woman so Charlie needs to go talk with her man and they can try and find best situation. Did love Ruby towards Brax though!! and Charlies comment about getting half of Summer Bay knocked up Looking forward to next update! Really appreciate you making the time

You're updates are ALWAYS more than ok! Thank you so much! Loved last two...Brax being sorry and getting involved and then building some confidence in himself was really nice. Bless poor Charlie about her op...glad that she is opening up and being open about her feelings...hope they continue to support eachother about this. I totally want my own Jacob!! He is too freaking cute and I loved Bianca with the present for him!! Really loving every update and that they each continue to develop. Glad Brax gave promise ring and his feelings about marriage haven't changed wham bam style. (If you know what I mean). I'm ALL for marriage but feelings don't magicially change and I'm glad and love that you show this. I hope they do... but I am definitely enjoying the journey Ruby...tut,tut,tut.... she best not be a cheater! Looking that way though..hope that she can either be honest with Xavier or give the guy some time at least. Looking forward to next update! Thanks

Brilliant chapter! So loved the feelings you portrayed and I was anxious reading down each line... Love your writing!! Brax is being a proper jerk! Needs to get to grips and support Charlie...I know she seemed a bit harsh before but they're both stressed out. I'm sure he's going to really regret pushing past her and hopefully they can help eachother. Little Jakey is Gorgeous - really comes to life. Poor Xavier! He's not my favourite but I actually felt for him... Brax and Ruby have some making up to do Thanks!!

Continuing to love this story and your writing! Really look forward to each update and glad they got back together... Thank you for sharing. I'm sure they'll be more stuff for them to work through and hope neither of them stuff it up

Oh my gosh! Totally loved Charlies planning for his birthday and how cute is Aria!!! Was gutted Heath disturbed them...I love their playful side with one another and how they both do nice things for eachother...very cute and lovely! Loving the story and enjoying the humour

Really great last couple of updates! Really enjoying story and writing is really good! Thank you for sharing - looking forward to next chapter! Loving the interaction between characters and can't wait to see how they continue to find out about one another

So very sorry about your loss and hope that you are getting comfort and support from those close around you. This story is so beautifully written and I enjoy every update. Truly brilliant last few chapters and thank you for continuing to share at a time that I'm sure is very sad for you and your family. Was glad Charlie and babies turned out to be fine...got bit panicked there and bless Brax and Charlie...both feeling bit stressed out it seems! Brax thinking he'd lost her, Charlie having operation and now dealing with babies at home. Looking forward to them learning together... Really lovely! Thanks so much

Oh my gosh!! Aaaahhhhh!! SO freaking cute and really creative! Beautiful update and very much enjoyed! LOVE Charlie loving her man and very excited for more - Well done!!

This is a really lovely story and its nice to see the different elements of Charlies life with her parents, little Ruby and her friends. Like how the relationship with Brax and Charlie is developing and hope there continues to be fun times for them continuing to get to know eachother. Really well written and looking forward to more

I'm SO sorry I've not been around for ages! Loved how story has developed and interested to see how Brax reacts to Tegans news... Hope it doesn't break Chax up before they even get properly settled down... Writing is great and looking forward to more. Many thanks and well done