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Gorgeous update!! Love this story how its developng. I can see Brax is seeing someone but I'm hoping he can get to meet Charlie soon... Really excited for this story and can't wait for more. Still so much to find out and you write so well Sad about Ross & Elise very emotional there and really nice how the girls brought them back to the bay and have laid them to rest. Can't wait for more - Thanks

:wub: Beautiful writing and Charlie and Brax was so emotional and so caring! Bless Charlie for what happened and Brax beng gentle with her. Hope that Ryan gets done by cops but understand Charlie being worried about it. Really looking forward to next update and thank you loads!!

Amazing couple of updates and again 2 updates in 1 day! You are spoilng us! Fabtastic writing!! Loved Brax on one knee making the promise to propose and that they talked and were honest with eachother. All the playng and interaction with the kids was brilliant and very real and cute Ash talkng with Jacob...gorgeous! Was not expecting Ryan to try that with Charlie Evil man! So glad Brax got there in time and hoping they can support eachother and Ryan gets busted for it. This story is so good and literally enjoyed each update and grateful you take the time to write and to share. I will read for as long as you write Thanks!

Oh my gosh!! Great update! ALWAYS hated Ryan...what a scum bag! I'm glad that Brax didn't punch him as I'm really hoping that Charlie does the honours! Please no drinking for Brax...he really seems to have recognised the weight of what he could lose if he went down that route. Liked how you wrote that. Hope that Brax talks to Charlie and doesn't have complete melt down. Can't believe Ryan over Charlie but Ryan did touch on some sensitive subjects for Brax and he will be feeling lost and gutted. Very excited for more! Hoping that they have talking time together Thank you!! Love it!

Each update is SO good - Thanks again! I like how you show the interaction so well even when there was no actual Chax scenes...we still know that they are having ssues. Really brilliantly written! Charlie is playing with fire and Ryan is being pushy and wanting to cause problems...he needs to take a running jump! Please Brax will be angry and gutted that she is keeping that from him as if there's nothing to hide...she would have told him already... Please be honest Charlie and don't go near Ryan... More Charlie and Brax chat please - its very good! Even when they are moody at eachother All the kid bits in last couple of updates are fab! Very real and love little Jacob Really excited to see how develops... Thinking Brax's marriage thing is fear that every thing will fall apart if married but he needs to make Charlie fully aware of that and not that its her. Its too early...I'm rambling sorry! Excited for more! Thanks

Such a fab amazing update! Love it!! Can't believe he never opened her letter Liked how Ruby knew it was them on the beach and loved all the emotion and Brax obviously still in love with his girl even with all the unanswered questons. Really excited and eager for more! Brilliant writing...thanks very much for sharing and please update soon

Really beautiful writing! Love Charlie and Brax talking but hoping for more. Brax was actually trying and she was obviously glad for Paige to come in their bed to stop themtalking further. They both have fears and I'm hoping they both talk. Charlie needs to tell Brax about Ryan...that could cause issues for them if they start having secrets and I hope Charlie doesn't see him again. Jacob and the talk with his tummy Daddy was brilliant. Loved it! Thanks so much for fab writing and always making it interesting and thoughtful and always eager for more!

Fabulous update and love how well you show their relationships and interaction. Bless Brax obviously still not confident of marriage... Really felt for Charlie when expected proposal didn't happen and hoping that Brax does change his thoughts at some stage. Jacob and the different names was gorgeous Always love update and eager for next! Thanks

Love this story and SO rediculously keen for updates!! Can't wait to find out what happened and has been happening to Brax and his brothers and Charlie and Ruby. So well written and the emotions and relationships are portrayed really well. Intrigued as to what the girls are referring to and hoping that Charlie and Brax can see each other soon. 10 years is a long time so imagine that lots could have changed in Braxs life... Really looking forward to more though

Completely LOVE this story! Thanks so much for each update and how frequently you update! I'm always so eager for each update and look forward to how they continue to develop and move forward Glad that Brax and Charlie talked it out and committed to trying to sort their relationship out and that they are moving slowly. Looking forward to them both continuing to be open with one another. Love how Riley and Paige obviously ecah have their favourite parent - So cute and well written!! The whole family time at the beach was gorgeous and glad that Chax didn't go backwards after Charlie finding Brax drinking... Hoping that she opens up to him after going to sessions.. I'm intrigued who the Daddy is but glad its not Brax... (unless you had Bianca type up fake 'cover' letter to try and make the peace...YES, I am this paranoid and sure you've still got interesting things to come). Lol! Really looking forward to more... Thanks as always for great writing and sharing!!

Was so not expecting '10 years later' but fabulous update and cannot wait for your next update! Love this story and your writing is fab!! Love it! Thanks!

Great update and lots of emotions shown... Can't see things running smoothly but very excited for the journey! Thanks for sharing!

Sorry missed commenting on last few chapters! I've spent some time reading back through from the beginning today and love this story! They've gone through so much and I really wish Charlie would open up and let herself be looked after or seek help from somewhere as proper suffering quietly with not being able to have more children and the operation. Obviously she's felt that she's had to remain strong due to dealing with everything but would be nice for Brax to recognise a bit more and be more gentle with her. Do love them together! You write their conversation and emotions so well and pleased that Charlie and Bianca are back talking and they had the delivery to bond and maybe heal some of their friendship. Know there is still a lot of potential heart ache coming up and really hoping that Bella is not a Brax baby! Looking forward to more as always!! Thank you!

Love last few updates! Brax and Charlie back on track and together is written so well and loving the conversation and their gentleness again towards eachother. Fabulous family time Love each update! Thanks SO much for sharing and SO grateful that you do it so frequently. Beautiful Hope Ruby isn't too upset when she realises she made the phone call... Looking forward to more

Love this story! Its such good writing and I've enjoyed each update. Just re-read the whole thing and can't wait for your next update. Proper heart breaking for Charlie and you showed her vulnerability so well. I'm nervous about how the next few updates will go but very eager to find out. Realised that Jack had mentioned Brax has something that he was going to give to Charlie so intrigued as to what that is as well. Hope that Brax can once again be there for his girl. Thanks so much! Fab writing!!

Fabulous last 2 updates! Loved their honesty with eachother and the love and humour portrayed. Really love your story and you are sogood to us all in updating so frequently. Still hoping there is some other guy that turns up and remembers his night with Bianca and that Chax can keep their happy time. Loved Brax and Charlie and their conversation. Such good writing and really looking forward to more. Thank you!! as always, fabulous!

Great update! Really love this story and very well written especially with Grant making his way in... Nervous as to how Charlie will react and what this will do to her. Hope that she can rely on Brax and be open and honest with him. I'm sure he will beat the living out of Grant when he finds out!! Looking forward to more

Woop, woop!! Amazing beautiful last 2 chapters!! Gorgeous interaction and loved all the emotion and flirting and was written so good!! Love it!! The Charlotte and Darryl stuff was really good and fabulous family day out! Hoping Charlie does not freak out and regret anything and that this can be the beginning of them sorting things out...please! Would like to have Charlie and Brax chat and her be open about why she's so gutted about Bianca being pregnant but where ever you go with this story, I'm sure I will love it! So excited for next update! Thanks so much

Thanks so much for all the updates! I enjoy this story so much and like that its moved on a few months although sad they've been apart so long. Really like that you revealed maybe the real issue for Charlie being that she is unable to have more kids with Brax and not just the possible betrayal. Love how they obviously still love eachother and hope that they can work it all out. Miss happy Chax and still nervous about the baby daddy but really looking forward to Jacobs birthday outing. Nice idea that its at the aquarium and love Jacobs continued obsession with pirates and fish. Looking forward to more

Oh my gosh...so good! I totally want my own Jacob! How cute is he... Hilarious with the fish fingers scene and him getting all worried. Brax and Charlie explaining what is going on is really good and felt the emotion and them wanting whats 'best' but both of them obviously hurting Charlie helping Bianca was nice and I get that she is still so angry but hoping that you please don't have Brax as the baby daddy and that it can be revealed before Brax and Charlie go the whole length of the pregnancy fracturing their relationship even more. Ruby and Matt was cute...seems she can't resist. As always,looking forward to more! Thanks

Sorry not been around to comment. Amazing fabulous last few chapters and 2 in the same day! Thank you SO much!! Beautiful writing as always and loved Brax with his boy and Brax and Charlie talking trying to sort out where they are at. I totally understand Charlie and where she is coming from and hope so much that it is someone else that Bianca got jiggy with and not Brax. Loved his vulnerability and him being open with Charlie. Love your writing! Always very excited for each update. Looking forward to more

Nice update..enjoyed Heath being woken by the 2 kiddies and I'm guessing Bianca is on the phone to Brax trying to convince him to take Charlie out but will wait and see...maybe someone completely different Really enjoy your writing, thanks for sharing

Loved Jacob wanting a snake...as if that was going to happen The idea of the gold fish with the pirate ship and treasure chest was really sweet and good and enjoyed all the conversation and interaction in this chapter and Charlie getting ready for Brax to come home. Please no with Bianca and pregnancy...I'm really hoping that you are just messing with our heads It would be the end for Charlie and Brax if Bianca is preggers by him... Loving everything else and looking forward to next update. Thanks

Thanks so much Laura. Really loved this story the whole way through. The emotion had me hooked and I was always so keen for you to update! Really well written with so many different emotions portrayed. Good luck with future stories and will be sure to watch out for them

Great last few updates! Loved the small steps between Charlie and Brax and Brax being more gentle and open... The "Daddy loves Mummy" was too cute and really feeling the emotion of them wanting to try and get it right. Ruby, Ruby, Ruby, aaaaaahhhhhaaahahhahhaaaa!! Bless her She is properly upset and wanting her Mumma!! That was wrote really well as well...very real with the being annoyed that parents never have their 'mobile' with them and 'on' Thank you so much for continuing to update so frequently. So love this story! HOPE that you are just messing with our heads and Bianca has some random sickness bug and is not preggers with Braxton baby as could not see them getting past that...drunk or not...no excuse. Please don't go there...