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Sazzle

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  1. I'm SO sorry I've not been around for ages! And especially that you've finished previous story. Absolutely brilliant writing!! Freaking LOVE this story and you are WAY generous about how often I see you update!! LOVED catching up and really looking forward to continued story. You have developed their relationship amazingly and describe their emotions and day to day life really well. Thank you for sharing your talent! Love Charlie and Brax and hoping that they can continue to move forward with eachother whatever comes their way - Exciting times - I'm often surprised with your writing and how story develops and love it! Thanks
  2. I'm SO sorry I've not been around for ages! This story is very creative and I amloving little Aria and her bulshiness! (if that is even a word) but I love her! So cute and feisty! Relationships are awesome and you portray them so well. Really grateful for all your updates and loving the story! Thank you
  3. I'm SO sorry I've not been around for ages! Loving this story and your writing. The emotion you share continues to be amazing! Felt so bad for Charlie with the kissing and her being broken hearted by Brax but then his hurt and upset as well....oh my gosh...sad times. Then crazy Tegan,although I'm not completely harsh and do feel for her but glad that Charlie has been great and got her back to her Daddy! Hope that Charlie can work things through with Brax and he takes a softer approach towards Tegan. Brilliant updates - Thanks
  4. Great couple of updates! Thank you for updating so frequently and for the way you write! Its honestly fab and each chapter leaves me wanting more! Think Brax will have to be quite persistent but I'm enjoying his efforts and glad he and Charlie are having some time together Love story - Really interested to see where things are heading with Ruby and Casey...
  5. Aria is too cute! Felt sad for her at the end there...bless her! Properly got 'Daddy' wrapped round her finger though Really nice update...great interaction and humour! Love your writing! Thanks
  6. Fabulous update! Loved Charlie being all anxious and worried about her man Brax Cute! Looking forward to both the camping trip and girls night! Interesting times.... Really nice update - Enjoying this story loads!
  7. Great update! Love Chax conversation and Charlie not letting Brax have an easy road with Jacob Feel gutted for Ruby...hate that it looks like Casey has done this...nice that Charlie is supporting so well. Fabulous writing as always! Thanks
  8. Fabtastic update! Really love your writing and happy that they are talking and trying. Was really nice to sense the vulnerability in both Charlie and Brax although I thought he didn't want it for a moment there and was about to slap him!! Heath sounds not so pleased with Brax...hope nought too serious happens.. Love Chax conversation! Bring on Jacob and Brax being buddies Thank you!
  9. Really lovely update! So sad with Brax and Charlie...they literally don't function well without eachother Loved Charlie wanting to be close to Lily... hope that they can track them down quickly and Charlie can be there for Brax.. You portray the tension really well. Looking forward to next update
  10. Loved the humour and fun play between Brax and Charlie. Really great relationships being portrayed and enjoying the story loads. Looking forward to your next update....interesting to see what else comes out of these boxes...
  11. Great couple of updates! Still really enjoying this story and loving the interaction and relationships! Don't know whats gone on between Ruby and Casey... Brax is trying to look out for Charlie although she's still not letting him. Would love Jacob to warm to Brax Fab writing! Thank you for updating so frequently!! Hoping Charlie is popping out to see Brax
  12. Really badly want to slap Tegan...flipping home wrecker!!! Gutted for Charlie seeing that but even more for Brax. He was letting Tegan know straight and 'immediately' had gotten out of his chair to tell her it wasn't happening...poor guy! He knows that Charlie is going to be properly heart broken as well Sad times... Hoping that Chax communicate and can sort things out soon... Really looking forward to next update Thank you!
  13. Really enjoying this story! Characters are described really nicely and I'm loving Arias feisty attitude. Looking forward to more! Thanks
  14. SO sorry I've not been on in ages! Crazy week at work... LOVE your writing in these last few chapters and was so happy that Charlie and Brax seemed to be getting a chance but can totally see why she's had to step back again because of Ruby. Looking forward to story continuing and thank you so much!!
  15. Fab writing...loved Brax admiring Charlie and their initial feelings for eachother. Will be sad when this ends but have enjoyed each chapter...Well done! Graveyard scene was very sweet and atmosphere really good. Liked Casey having Brax tell Cheryl... Really great, thanks
  16. This is continuing to be a really beautiful story - Love that they've had a great honeymoon and cute family bonding time! Looking forward to the day to day Braxton/Buckton family life and the great interaction between them all. Thanks
  17. Brilliant last 2 updates! Love the interaction you show between Charlie and Jacob - really beautiful!! Glad Brax is back in town...looking forward to both of them trying to deal with their feelings and hoping that Jacob likes Brax Great writing! Really enjoying this story!! Thanks SO much!! Love that Bianca and Ruby know the real deal with Charlie...
  18. Really great story...properly feel for Heath. He's the bad boy type you just want to cuddle it out with Thank you for update, continuing to look forward to more. Love that you portray normal feelings so well
  19. Really enjoying the updates! Tegan is not handling life very well but loving Brax looking after his baby and soothing her like that. Hope that nothing bad happens to Tegan but eager for more bonding time with Chax and Lily Looking forward to next update
  20. This is really beautifully written! Love Brax and Charlie having a great honeymoon and now with the girls turned up...really nice! Looking forward to more and the way in which you show their relationships... Love it!!
  21. Danni I love your writing...its awesome! Thanks for last few updates...they are FABulous!! Still not loving Ryan but at least he is being nice to Charlie. Loved interaction between Charlie and her kids...I've had the "dissappointed" chat with my Mum before and its devastating Was really well written. Seriously looking forward to any Chax conversations or info...you know if you fancy that idea any time soon Really enjoying story! Thanks
  22. Caught up with last two updates - Really good! Loved Cheryl and the principal and the portrayal of the Braxton brothers is really nice with all of them trying to fill their role. Interaction is very good...glad that they are all still thinking of Danielle in their own way and she's not forgotten. Thanks and well done for updates! Looking forward to more
  23. Really lovely update! Great writing and really excited for this story to continue already. They are really cute, glad they're enjoying their time together and their loving banter is really good. Well done, looking forward to more
  24. Love the writing and the atmosphere you set! It feels SO wrong having Charlie with Ryan It was seriously upsetting me but I'm glad Charlie is at least trying to move on... Hated her deleting Brax picture in previous update! Sad times!! Still hoping that Brax pops up soon'ish' - Ryan seems too good to be true and Charlie sure doesn't seem to feel a spark or much passion for him. There has to be something wrong about him... Enjoyed Rubys chat trying to get the gossip... Thank you for updates! Really do love this story...even without Brax. I know he has a LOT to make up for but hope that you want him to at least have a good try Thanks for updates
  25. This is Gorgeous!! Love Brax adoring Charlie and lovely writing! Really excited to read this story! Loved pregnant proportions...your interaction and relationships are really good. Excited for your next update! Hope they have perfect honeymoon without bad drama Thanks
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