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Great chapter, Lol at Charlie and Brax phoning all the time to check that Aria is ok and Heath telling them to stop stalking them or he'd disconnect the phone Aww Bianca and Heath babysitting together was so cute. I actually really wanted them to kiss. I'm so torn now - I like Bianca and Liam, but I'm also liking Bianca and Heath , More soon please

Aww shame - this was a really good story. But it does work really well with just the few chapters though. I hope you do write another Charlie and Brax fic, because I really loved this one, Can't wait to read more stories by you

Great update, Loved Charlie's description of Brax - he was just so .... Brax lol Oh dear Ruby was late to school. Aww Casey and Ruby were glad to see each other . Liked Caseys comment about her entrance being even more spectacular than the first. More soon please

Great chapter, Glad that Charlie's not getting the abortion . Also glad that she's decided to tell Angelo the truth. Even if he is a jerk he still deserves to know if he's a father or not. More soon please

Great update, I felt sorry for Charlie finding out that the guy she likes is a riverboy, and Brax for finding out that the girl he likes is a cop. Heath was very funny in that chapter But no!! Don't cancel the date Charlie!! I hope she meets up with Brax and lets him explain. More soon please

Great update, So Charlie and Joey are dating now. Kinda funny that Brax likes Joey but eventually he's gonna end up dating her girlfriend. And all the Robbo stuffs gone down as well. Poor Joey. Nice touch making Belle one of Brax's clients. And especially the thing to do with Belle OD'ing on Rachel's wedding day. Poor Brax at the end though , More soon please

Great update, Liked Charlie telling Bianca about all the parenting things that she had to look forward to - like changing diapers - lol. Glad that Bianca decided to baby sit so that Charlie and Brax could have some time to their selves, Lol at the banter between Heath and Liam. It sounds like they've managed to sort out a lot of arrangements though so thats good at least, More soon please

Great update, Glad that Nicole seemed to come round a bit in that chapter. And aww Angelo wants Charlie to keep the baby - I hope she does, Happy that Ruby and April sorted things out, and so did Ruby and Casey even if she hasn't told him the whole truth about Grant yet, More soon please

Great update, Nice touch bringing Heath and Suzy into it, And it was Brax who got Joey the pawn trawler job - nice!! Poor Brax, he likes Joey but Joey is never going to like him the same way More soon please

Great update, Lol at Charlie and Bianca shopping and then getting Casey to do the hard work while they ate icecream , Poor Bianca, everything so complicated for her at the minute, at least they've sorted out the last name now, more soon please

Great update, Aww Jack just died! Now I'm sad . Can't believe that Jake and his gang would be so disrespectful to joke about it though. Glad that Brax and the riverboys didn''t. And ooh, the first meeting of Charlie and Brax!! Yay! Loved Charlie's sarcasm, but can't really blame her though. More soon please

Ok so I missed 3 updates, sorry! Oh no!! Poor Charlie!! I can't believe that anyone could do that! At least the guys in jail now, but poor Charlie can't ever have kids again now. And how at Brax and Charlie with their daughter, glad that Charlie isn't going to give her up. Wow the whole pregnancy thing with Bianca is starting to get even more complicated. More soon please

Great two chapters, Liked that Ruby and Xavier talked, but she should still be with Casey. Glad that she still wanted to meet up with him again. Uhoh, Brax didn't want to go to the party anyway and then he ended up getting busted by Charlie!! More soon please

Sorry that I missed two updates, they were both great. Poor Brax crushing on Joey, the one person who will never like him back. Glad that he and Teagan argued - I'm back to disliking her again. Glad that Brax was looking out for his neighbour. Aww heath teaching darcy to surf was cute. I'm glad that heath suspects that he is actually her dad. Lol at what Darcy said when Jack and Angelo pulled Heath over More soon please

Sorry I missed two chapters. No Charlie that was a date, and no you shouldn't just be friends. Aww I felt sorry for Ruby when Casey brought up the subject of her dad. Hope that Ruby tells Casey so that he will understand. Ugh Nicole is unbelivable. She's never happy with anything that she has. More soon please

Great chapter, Oh dear colleen knows. Oh my god she's spilled the beans to Leah, and a riverboy overheard!! That is not good!! Update soon please !!

Great update, Charlie and Angelo pulling over Nicole for driving without a license - I remember when that happened in the show lol. Brax met Angelo in that chapter but didn't meet Charlie - shame!! But they will meet, I will just have to be patient. Lol at the Braxton's trying to talk Angelo out of giving them a ticket. And it was Heath who noticed Charlie not Brax, hmm very interesting. More soon please

Oh mu god - amazing update!! 7 years into the future - how old does that make each of the Braxtons? Ruby and Pat coming to the bay and asking for directions - nice . So this means that Charlie had just moved to the bay if I remember correctly. Damn if Charlie's just moved then that means that they won't get together for about 3 years if this is going to follow the same lines as the show. Poor Casey, its sad that the whole thing with Johnny changed him, but if this is 7 years into the future that means that both Johnny and Rocco are dead doesn't it? Wow Brax crushing on Joey!! Nice way to bring her and Brett into it earlier. Teagan's back - not good. But Darcy is cute though. More soon please

Great update, Lol at Ruby tripping over Aww I felt sorry for Charlie and Ruby when Brax made the sister comment. Glad that Ruby met Casey and that they seem to be getting along well. Go away Xavier - Ruby should be with Casey More son please

Poor Charlie - Heath shouldn't make comments like that even if he's not happy about Charlie and Brax dating. I really hope she doesn't give up her baby. I hope that Bianca, Liam and Heath can sort stuff out soon. More soon please

Sorry I know I haven't updated in ages. But I lost my USB which had all my finished chapters for this fanfiction on it . So now I have to rewrite them, which means it might be a few days before I update the next chapter, sorry xx

Don't worry about it being short; it was extremely informative Yay Annie's a Braxton!! Can't wait to read everyones reactions to this. More soon please

Great update, I agree that everything would be so much simpler for everyone if Charlie wasn't pregnant, but I don't think that she should abort the baby. But then I also do think that at the end of the day it's Charlies decision, even if I don't agree with her choice. Poor Ruby being the one who discovered Nicole and Angelo together. I'm glad that Angelo and Charlie talked, even if it didn't seem to do much good. More soon please

Haha great chapter Liked the sort of stand off between Ruby and Kelly. Aww Xavier and Ruby still love each other Yay Charlie got her job back. Hehe and she had a date with Brax ... I mean a coffee *cough cough* More soon please

Again, sorry I missed heaps of updates on this story as well. Chapter 23- Teagan had her baby, and the doctors thought that Brax was the father . Casey holding Darcy was cute, and Heath's sort of knowing that he had a connection to Darcy was awesome!! Chapter 24- No!! Brax you can't get back together with Teagan!! I liked that Brax seems to love Darcy so much. Aww Rocco and Casey promising to stay friends even though their brothers dont like each other was cute! Johnny should stop being so mean to Casey, but then again it is johnny cooper, so thats never going to happen. Chapter 25- No Johnny!!! Poor Casey, I hope he's alright. And Brax got hit by another car!! Chapter 26- Poor Casey, wanting to know when Brax was going to pick him up! And Johnny is so evil, Brax and Heath gave him the money but he still wasn't going to give Casey back! Glad that Brax brought the gun, otherwise who knows what would have happened to Casey. Cheryl - don't do that to your kids - ever!! Especially when it wasn't poor Casey's fault. Liked the bit at the end of the chapter where Brax was thinking about how he would treat his own kids if he ever had any.