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Great chapter, I'm torn!! I want Charlie to meet up with Brax, but if she does then it could spoil her chances of getting Jacob back! Glad Morag is helping Nicole! Aww I felt so sorry for Ruby thinking that she had ruined Charlie's chances with her diabetes!! Hope she hasn't! More soon please

Great update, Loved the brotherly talk between Brax and Casey!! Aww I feel sorry for Heath! He's just acting tough to hide his insecurities!! More soon please

Great update, Loved Charlie's whole part in that chapter! Especially her in glee in Heath admitting they needed her ! Haha pregnant Bianca is funny! Aww Heath!! I'm laughing at him right now, but I do feel sorry for him!! More soon please

Great chapter, Haha I loved Charlie and Bee in that chapter!! Dancing and eating weird food combination's to induce labor !! Bianca and Liam !! Liam - I feel so used!! lol. Ok, this time the baby actually is coming!! More soon please

Great update, Aww I feel sorry for all the Braxtons !! None of them are coping very well!! Teagan *sigh*!! Brax what are you thinking?! I get that you're upset - but still!! Just hang on a bit til you and Charlie!! More soon please

Great chapter, I actually feel heaps sorry for Nicole !! I'm glad that Charlie and Ruby have managed to put their differences with Nicole aside and are supporting her! I'm really worried that Charlie having Jacob in the house are gonna ruin her chances or at least delay her chances of getting Jacob back!! More soon please

Great update, Glad that even though Charlie quit the force she has stuff lined up. Omg - Bianca testing Charlie like that was just hilarious !!! And bee taking marks off for her wardrobe too!! Ooh i like the sound of your idea for a Chax fic!! I will happily wait to read it !!! More soon please

Great chapter, Glad that the Braxton brothers told their dad where they stood on him being in their lives. So glad that Heath and Danielle got to meet before she passed. The last paragraph was so sad, but really well written!! Really hope that at some point Brax finds out about Charlie and Danielle being friends, because I reckon he would respect Charlie heaps if he finds out. More soon please

Great update, Haha loved impatient Charlie at the start !! Totally understand why she was though. Aww Charlie bonding with Jacob was so sweet !! Glad that Jane is nice and thinks that Charlie will get Jacob back! Aww felt so sorry for Nic at the end! But I'm worried that Charlie will get in trouble if she takes Jacob!! More soon please

Great chapter, Haha loved Charlie's indignation as the doctor suggested sex for getting the baby out !! Omg Teagan's in labour!! I knew as soon as she went for a walk that something like that would happen!! Hopefully they get help in time, or Charlie may find herself having to deliver Teagan's baby!! Might bond them though if she had to!! More soon please

Great update, Glad that Danielle got to meet her father. Even if her father is a complete jerk! Good to see Braxton brother bonding in that chapter! More soon please

Great chapter, Hehe I like the sound of 'for now'!! Very promising!! Once again, cute talk between Charlie and Bianca!! Aww nice to see Liam and Bianca bonding again in that update! More soon please

Great update, Can't believe Teagan hit Charlie and then just left her there! But at least it was an accident rather than an ex's revenge, coz Teagan didn't even know that Charlie and Brax were dating! Lol I loved the whole prank thing !! OMG Ruby and Xavier kissed! Wonder what's gonna happen with that?! More soon please

Great two updates, Can't believe Angelo's dead! He was a jerk, but his heart was in the right place I guess, he just never went about it in the right way! Can't believe that Nicole is going to try and keep Jacob! I get that she's just looking to hurt Charlie coz she blames Charlie for losing Angelo, but still!!! Wow Poor Xavier walking in on that - that's the third time thats happened!! More soon please

Great oneshot, Was very entertaining to read

Wow great update, It was interesting to read a slightly nicer side to Hammer over the whole Ruby thing. Shame that it was too late to do any good. Wow at the ending!! I actually think that Hammer shot Heath not Angelo, coz Heath was being so cocky towards him!! More soon please

Great update, Wow, that's not good news about Danielle, but at least she's not dead! So Brax found his dad. Poor Brax, I felt sorry for him in that update, Nice link making it the center that Ross was at, and it was a nice talk that the pair of them had. Loved the ending - Brax, that girl is the girl that you are destined to fall in love with, ok? !! More soon please

Aww great two updates, Loved Bianca's surprise!! My memory is temporarily failing me at the minute, so I'm just going to ask now to save myself future confusion - I know Charlie and Brax live together but are they married as well? If not they should be ! More soon please

Sorry I missed a load of updates, I loved that you brought back heaps of the old characters back for the wedding! That was a very nice touch ! OMG at the ending!! More soon please

Great update, Glad everything is ok with the baby ! Wow, selfless Charlie in that chapter!! More soon please

Oh my god!! That was amazing!!! And heartbreaking!! I actually nearly cried reading that!! It was more realistic that it didn't work out, but I couldn't help but wish as I read the end that this was the start of a longer story! Because it was so, so awesome!!

Great few updates, Feel so sorry for Charlie!!! Oh my god! Not only is Angelo the most self centered person ever, he's also the dumbest!! More soon please

Great chapter, Wow, so intense!! More soon please

Great update, Nice link making Heath go to Phuket and meet Cassie and Sally!! Hope Heath gets to meet Danielle before it's too late!! More soon please

Great update, Omg - Cheryl is the best! She's so annoying, but so, so funny!! More soon please