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Great update, Aww I felt sorry for Teagan seeing Grant again. But obviously I feel more sorry for Charlie and Ruby, because they're the ones he's gonna be harrassing, Heath comforting Teagan was cute , Ooh the ending sounds interesting, but sorry Brax, Ross is the one who's gonna kill Grant, not you! More soon please

Great update, Aww Ruby and Aria bonding was cute and so was Charlie and Bianca's talk , Huh Liam got given a gig by Heath, wasn't expecting that, More soon please

Great update, Ohoh Brax is up to dodgy Riverboy stuff!! I kinda gained a bit more respect for Nicole after her talk with Charlie... but I still hate her!! I think her and Angelo moving to the city is a good idea - they're not in Summer Bay, but they're still close enough to be part of the baby's life. at Charlie only being able to think about Brax, even after the serious conversation with Nicole!! Not sure where I stand on the whole Ruby and Nicole thing. I can kinda see where they're both coming from! But I think that I probably would have reacted the same way as Ruby did though!! More soon please

Great update, Lol at Casey trying to sneak out so that he wouldn't have to answer Ruby's questions !! Busted!! at Charlie and Brax playing twenty questions!! That was so cute!! I also have a bad feeling about this trip, hope nothing too serious happens!! More soon please

Great update, So Brett just ran over Charlie with his car - if i remember correctly it was this that caused Charlie's secret about Ruby being her daughter to come out - so it will be interesting to see if you incorporate that at all and the Braxton's perspective on it all. Aww poor Brax feeling guilty at the end , More soon please

Great chapter, I still hate Angelo, but in a way I can kinda see where he is coming from on the whole non-biological/biological dad thing. Aww Charlie thinks that Angelo is gonna want to stay in the bay and watch his kid grow up , I think I might have an idea what Nicole wants to talk about, and I hope I'm right! More soon please

Great update - it was worth the wait, Glad that Bianca confided in Charlie about what happened with Heath. I actually want Bianca to get with Heath More soon please

Yay you updated!! Brax and May - very interesting.Lol at Brax catching Charlie leaving Angelo's . Heath and Brax winding up Angelo was funny too . More soon please

Great update, Aww Ruby was so sweet in that chapter, all worrying about Charlie Yay!! Charlie and Brax are back together !! More soon please

Sorry I missed two updates, Glad that Ruby told Casey the truth and that he was so supportive, Grr I hate Angelo! Even though what Charlie was going to do was wrong, he's in no place to judge, I hope Brax is still there !! Run Charlie, run!! More soon please

Great chapter, Don't worry about it being short. The fight was written very descriptively , More soon please

Great update, Lots of amusing moments in that chapter. Liked Ric and Romeo's talk about being dads, and Nicoles sister solidarity for not drinking, More please

Aww Great story . I loved the ending!!

Great update, at Ruby telling Brax not to hurt her mum. Ahahaha at Xavier and Casey's conversation and yeah go Casey for punching him!! He had it coming. More soon please

Great update, Glad that Brax knows the truth now, Loved Ruby's concern for Charlie - that was sweet More soon please

YAY!! You updated!! Liked Ruby and Charlie catching up Tegan lives with Irene now? And Oh no she didn't!! She is trying to pay Charlie to leave Summer Bay, that's not gonna go down well if Brax finds out. Worried about what Teagan's up to. Loved Bianca's reaction to seeing Charlie again, and them catching up More soon please

Sorry I missed the first few updates, but I'm really liking this story, Update soon please

Great update, Yay at Brax telling Heath that he was definitely quitting the Riverboys. Oh my god, the person who hit Charlie, just left her there?? Jerk!! But at Brax finding her though and making sure that she got to safety. at the end of that chapter!! More soon please

Liking this fic so far, More soon please

Great update, No!! Brax don't leave!! That was really well written, but I'm so depressed now . More soon please

Aww Brax , More soon please .

Great update, Oh no Charlie got hit by a car . And now Brax thinks that she stood him up when she was actually going to meet him!! Oh my god - Brax quit the Riverboys!! More soon please

Great update, Ooh I thought Charlie was gonna be in for it from Ruby for drinking for a minute. Oh oh, if Charlie's getting morning sickness she's not gonna be able to hide her pregnancy for much longer. Yay Charlie and Brax !! Looking forward to seeing what Caseys surprise is. More soon please

Great start, More soon please

Great update, Loved Brax's take on everything that happened with the whole Joey/Charlie/Hugo mess. And aww at Joey acknowledging Brax's crush for her, and saying that if she wasn't gay then she would definitely go for him . Nice touch bringing the shark attack thing. Brax the place to start is with Charlie - but that won't happen for a while yet so be patient!! Ooh I just thought of something - later when Teagan sees Charlie, is she going to recognise her as the girl that Grant attacked all those years ago? If she does, that could be interesting, More soon please