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Ok so I've missed so many updates all of which were great Chapter 10- Oh dear Colleen found out, not going to be a secret for long is it? April and Ruby's talk made me laugh. Oh and now Heath knows, whoops!! Chapter 11- Liked the talk between Bianca and Charlie. And lol at Heath and Brax talking about how they had both knocked women up . Glad that Bianca told Heath what she wanted to say. Chapter 12- Oh no! Charlie wants to give the baby up for adoption!! . Glad that Charlie and Bianca are going to each others ultrasounds. Aww Heath want's to be involved . I'm glad that Bianca and Liam are back together, but still I'm glad that Heath wants to be part of the baby's life. Chapter 13- Aww Charlie, you know you want to keep the baby!! And Charlie's having a girl and Biancas having a boy!! Bianca and Heath being happy about their baby was cute but I felt sorry for Liam though.

Great update, I agree with Angelo90, somebody please just punch Nicole!! Angelo is trying to do the best he can for him, Nicole and George, But no, now that everythings not going the way she wanted, she's angry. Well grow up Nicole, Angelo isn't going to abandon his kid for you!! I liked Ruby and Charlie's talk, but I really liked the talk between Casey and Charlie. I liked him calling her Miss Buckton, that made me laugh More soon please

Great update. I understood why Teagan lied to Brax and Heath in that chapter, but I don't agree with it though. Lol at Casey asking where babies came from in that chapter More soon please

Wow great chapter . So April and Ruby now know that Bianca is pregnant. And Bianca knows that Charlie is pregnant. Liked Heath's hint that Bianca was putting on weight. I guess even though Charlie is more pregnant than Bianca, she is normally really skinny so it doesn't show as much. So Heath knows as well that Charlie is pregnant. And to Brax. I'm sensing a very interesting conversation between Brax and Heath coming up. More soon please

Great update, I liked all the stuff about how teagan loves Heath but is in love with Brax. I thought that was a very good way of describing how she was feeling. Aww poor Casey, why did Johnny have to be so mean to him? More soon please!!

Charlie really should have told Bianca about the baby then - she's not going to be able to keep it a secret for ever. But I understand why it might be difficult for her to talk about though. I liked Liam and April's chat, I'm glad that April's words seemed to help him. More soon please

Great start Chickiboomxx, More soon please

Great chapter That was sad, but very well done. Hope that Annie turns out to be their sister. More soon please

Great chapter. Casey and Rocco Cooper being friends? Very interesting. I love how you've integrated all the characters in this story. Poor Teagan, I actually for once do feel sorry her. So sad that she didn't get to see her mum one last time. I liked this bit in particular - "Brax had to admit, getting over Teagan had been a fairly easy task and he had moved on and had one or two relationships in the last eighteen months, but he did miss her. Grant was gone and there was no danger for her, and Brax pitied the poor girl, who had lost so much. His care for her was purely platonic and he was glad to have his fears and worries put aside, knowing that she was finally home and alright." Yes Braxy, Charlie is the only girl for you - ever!! You just have to wait a while. More soon please

It was definitely worth the wait - great chapter !! Glad that Ruby listened to what Charlie had to say and that she called her mum. And also that she knows that Brax is the father. Aww how cute was Ruby and Olivia?? I have a fair idea what Teagan's plan might be, and I really hope that I'm not right for once, coz that would be so low if she's gonna do what I think she is!! More soon please

I somehow missed the last two chapters but Oh my god!! Grant is Teagan's half brother?? And I'm assuming it was a younger Charlie who was getting abused by him. Great twist, but oh my god I'm still in shock. Like that Brax feels all protective for her. Glad that Grant got bashed (assuming it was either Brax or Heath who did it) he definitely had it coming. Awesome two chapters, more soon please

Great chapter. Loved Charlie trying to hide why she was at the prenatal ward from Bianca. And Bianca wondering why Brax was in the prenatal ward as well - lol Glad that Bianca and Liam are trying to talk things through. More soon please

Great update. Liked this line "There was no denying it; Teagan Callaghan was every guy’s dream. Just not Brax’s" and this one "As usual, Brax didn’t repeat the romantic phrase back to her." a lot . Because Brax will only ever love Charlie!!! Ooh Teagan has an evil brother! Could be interesting More soon please

Wow great chapter!! Nicole can't really expect Charlie to forgive her, can she?? Can't believe that she asked Charlie to talk to Ruby about being friends with her again. Poor Brax, he doesn't have a clue what's going on. I hope Charlie tells him about being pregnant before it becomes obvious. Can you imagine if Brax thought it might be his? More soon please

Wow was not expecting that! Poor Casey not knowing what to do!! More soon please!!

I somehow seem to have missed the last two updates. They were both really good. Oh my god - you brought Johnny Cooper into it!! Very nice touch, I must say . Poor Brax feeling guilty at the end of the last chapter though!! Update soon please

I somehow missed the last two chapters - which were both awesome!! Glad that Charlie told Brax and that he seems to have taken it well. Bianca really needs to tell Heath the truth, because in 9 months it's gonna be pretty obvious and even Heath is good enough at maths to figure out that he's the father. More soon please

Loved that chapter Yes Charlie you should definitely listen to your own advice. Great punch up between Liam and Heath. More soon please

Aww Casey was s cute in that chapter!! Lol at Brax telling Casey that he and Teagan were wrestling and that Casey told him not to in case he hurt Teagan More soon please

Great chapter Ma Braxton seems nicer in this fic then she is in the actual show. Glad that both she and Brax want to find their lost daughter/sister. I hope that Aaron is found x

Oh my god!! Is Charlie pregnant too??!! And to Brax??!! I really hope that Bianca and Liam can work through everything. Great update - I look forward to the next chapter

Great chapter, I'm actually sort of liking Teagan a bit more (I did say sort of) in this chapter. As soon as she asked Heath if he had ever been kissed, I knew that she was going to kiss him More soon please

Another great update. Looks like Teagan is manipulative even as a kid. Wonder who Brax's new girlfriend is. More soon please

Wow great first chapter - I look forward to more, Update soon please

Aww he split up with Fitzy - I knew it was going to happen but still Interesting that was Heath's idea to get into selling drugs. Its nice that he wanted to help but I wish it was more of a legal way to help. More soon please!!