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Great chapter, Haha loved Bianca's chocolate cake bribes !! Aww Aria is so cute !! She totally has every adult wrapped around her little finger!! Lovely talk between Morag and Charlie too!! More soon please

Great update, Good to see that Brax is finally starting to grow up a little! God Teagan!! She should have got the picture by now that Brax is just not interested in her!! Hoping that the arrival of cops will mean Charlie!! More soon please

Great update, Charlie was awesome in that update!! She was so nice to Teagan despite all their differences!! Feel a bit sorry for Teagan! More soon please

Great update, Aww they're such a cute little family !! More soon please

Great chapter, It was nice to see Charlie let her guard down a little at the graveyard. Cute interactions between her and Brax !! Glad Casey has decided to go back to school! Hehe cop fantasies !! More soon please

Great chapter, I think that Charlie does genuinely like Ryan, but she will always love Brax !! She will be only settling for Ryan if she continues to see him!! Aww Jacob is so cute !! More soon please

Great update, Aww shame that you're not going to continue when you get up to the bit where the show begins !! Mel and Casey were very sweet in that chapter !! Nice linking of Brax getting all the liquor! I agree with EmyKate68, can we please have a little bit of Chax before this story ends ?? More soon please

Aww cute update, Hehe Dory and Nemo!! Aria was just too cute in that chapter !! Had to laugh at overprotective Charlie though over Aria swimming !! More soon please

Great update, Brax is back !!!!! Though in a way I did kind of find myself agreeing with Bianca a little though! But I still want Chax to get back together !!! More soon please

Great update, Aww!! Casey is such a sweetie !! Gotta love him!! Poor Heath, he's not in a good place at the moment is he??! More soon please

Great update, Aww!! Valen's sentence was so cute !! Haha typical Brax rolling his eyes though!! Charlie's really got her happy little family hasn't she ??!! Haha, got to love all her interactions with Brax and Ruby !! More soon please

Great update, Haha loved that Ruby was more scared of Charlie being disappointed in her than getting yelled at! Aww Jacob was cute as in that update !! OMG!! You can't leave it hanging like that !!!!! More REALLY soon please

Wow great end twist!! Very satisfying last chapter!! Everything was rounded off very nicely !! Thank you for sharing this story with us

Great update, Wow! I get that Teagan is experiencing post-natal depression, but still!! Can't believe that she could be so reckless with Lily! Charlie and Brax should totally take over custody of Lily, and be a happy little family !! More soon please

Great update, Miss congeniality? Pure class!! Has to be the actual best movie of all time !! Ruby talking to Jacob was so !! Very cute!! Hmm, still not made my mind up about Ryan yet!! No, screw it - Team Chax all the way !!! More soon please

Great update, Haha cute friendship between Bianca and Charlie!! They're so close that they're missing each other already!! Loved, loved, loved all the banter between Brax and Charlie. E.g. his continual referral to her as Sarge, her continual referral to him as hubby, Charlie blackmailing him to get him to swim with her, skinny dipping, ... the list could go on!! Basically Chax = !! More soon please

Great update, More soon please

Great update, Haha loved Ruby's whole reaction to Charlie's date!! But me thinks that Charlie isn't quite as excited about Ryan as she should be!! Enter Brax... !! Wow Ryan was so good about Charlie's whole big revelation about Angelo and Brax!! But I agree, he seems a bit too good to be true!! Come on Brax!! Get out of jail already and win Charlie back!! More soon please

Great update, Loved all the interactions between all the Braxtons!! Aww Heath!! The forgotten middle child!! I agree - it can't be long until the Braxton's hit the bay!! Please continue this story when you get up to them arriving in the bay!! Please!! More soon please

YAY!! You started this story already!! I'm so happy now !! Loved finding out how Brax proposed!! It was so sweet as well!! Ooh liking the sound of this honeymoon!! That whole update was just !! More soon please

Great two updates, Aww felt sorry for Brax at the start of the first update!! Hopefully it won't be long til he and Charlie get together!! Aww poor Casey!! He was just sticking up for that girl, and he gets expelled for it !! Cheryl.... what can I say? She' so annoying, but so,so funny though!! More soon please

Great 2 updates, 1st update: Haha glad Teagan got her comeuppance!! Oh please don't let her be pregnant!! I agree with Danni - I have to remember that this is a fanfic and not to take it so seriously, but still!! Loved the ending !! 2nd update: Haha loved Colleen's reaction to finding out about them having a baby together!! Aww cute family outing though !! OH NO!! Teagan's pregnant !! Please let it be wrong or someone else as the father!! More soon please

Great update, Amusing rivalry between the girls and guys !! More soon please

Great few updates, So Ryan seems nice enough I guess, if not slightly presumptuous and showy off! Sorry, I guess that's the Chax part of me talking !! Good advice from Bianca once again. More soon please

Great update, Aww Charlie, Brax and Lily are like a little family , despite the fact that Tegan is actually the mother!! Can't help but think that something really bad is going to happen at the party and then Charlie and Brax decide to go for full custody. Or that Tegan will simply run away and leave Lily behind with them!! I got a bad feeling about this party!! More soon please