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Aww I loved that one!! So glad that Ruby and Charlie spoke things through and are now forming a nice bond. That ending was just so lovely. Can't wait for more!

Oooh tension much with Charlie and Brax!! I hope he gets rid of Tegan soon and then he, Charlie and baby Liv can be a wee family! And Ruby too of course, although judging by that ending it might take a while for Ruby and Charlie to work things out! Update soon

Sorry I'm only getting around to reading and commenting on this now! Missed so many great updates. Chapter 6 - Oooops Jenny, again! She really needs to think a little bit before she speaks, doesn’t she. But I guess the stress of this situation for her is making her ramble things out. OhMyGoodness! Ruby slapped Charlie. Oh dear Ruby, that really wasn’t the best way to go about this, but the poor girl must be so hurt and confused, I don’t blame her for lashing out but poor Charlie, I don’t think she deserved that slap! Chapter 7 – Ruby’s attitude is really making me hate her! I can’t really feel all that sorry for her when she is acting like such a brat! Brax, all bless him. He is so sweet going to comfort Charlie. Chapter 8 - ‘but her daughter really was quite a judgemental, self-centred brat.’ – I loved that line. It made me chuckle a bit and I think Charlie was spot on with her characterisation of her daughter. I’m glad Ruby figured it out for herself so Charlie didn’t actually have to tell her, but yet again she made it all about her and couldn’t for one second even think about how it must have been for 14 year old Charlie. Grrr Ruby! Chapter 9 - Loved the advice that Brax gave Ruby and I’m really glad that Ruby listened. Looking forward to the next chat between Charlie and Ruby. Can’t wait for more. Update soon

Great ending Cally! I'm so sad it's over, but still, you ended it well! For a moment I was really scared for Charlie and Ruby there, but thankfully they were both okay in the end. And Matt died, wow, I didn't expect that. Can't wait for more from you!

Great update!! Loved VJ's and the teens reactions to seeing Charlie again! Brax picking up Olivia and kissing and hugging her gave me the cutest image! Oh dear, Tegan and Charlie meet! This is going to be interesting. Update soon

I'm glad Brax didn't stay angry with Charlie for too long! I got such a lovely picture in my head when Brax was holding Olivia. I think Brax would be a great daddy. And Charlie loves Brax! Hmmm need to get rid of Tegan! Update soon

Great update! Can't wait to see what Brax says know he knows he has a daughter! Update soon

Good update. I like Brax comforting Charlie Looking forward to more.

I don't mind that they kissed behind Xavier's back, but once they decided that they wanted to be together they should've come right out and told Xavier straight away. From the promo it looks like they don't, for whatever reason, and that in my book makes it cheating... unless they decide to not see eachother until she tells Xavier... but still, kind of cheating. All that said, I don't really care They're adorable!! Yeah, I actually meant the writers there having Dex and April admit feelings for eachother when she was with Xavier. I probably should have made that more clear lol. But as for kissing him when she was still with Xaiver, I didn't mind that so much as long they don't do it again until she breaks up with Xavier, although judging by the promo it's not looking likely. Haha, yeah, Dex and April I think they are much better suited that April and Xavier, they have never really worked for me. Yeah, I blame the writers for putting April back with Xavier in the first place. I don't see why they can't just have a couple get together without having someone else involved. I don't like Xavier much but isn't this like the third time this has happened to him. I know he wears those terrible swimming trunks, but even taht doesn't deserve all this cheating... although they are terrible terrible shorts. Yes, it's annoying. I wish they could have gotten them together without involving Xavier, but oh well Dex and April are together (which is what I have wanted for ages) so I guess I shouldn't complain too much! Yeah cos Ruby did it to him twice, and now April. As much as I don't like the guy, I do feel a wee bit sorry for him. And yes, I think we need to burn those shorts!

I don't mind that they kissed behind Xavier's back, but once they decided that they wanted to be together they should've come right out and told Xavier straight away. From the promo it looks like they don't, for whatever reason, and that in my book makes it cheating... unless they decide to not see eachother until she tells Xavier... but still, kind of cheating. All that said, I don't really care They're adorable!! Yeah, I actually meant the writers there having Dex and April admit feelings for eachother when she was with Xavier. I probably should have made that more clear lol. But as for kissing him when she was still with Xaiver, I didn't mind that so much as long they don't do it again until she breaks up with Xavier, although judging by the promo it's not looking likely. Haha, yeah, Dex and April I think they are much better suited that April and Xavier, they have never really worked for me.

Yey for Dex and April! Not sure I'm liking the way they went about it though. Getting April back with Xavier seemed pretty pointless imo.....but yeah, can't wait for Dex and April!

Poor Ruby finding out about her real mother being in the bay in that way. Looking forward to more.

Great update! Surprised Brax kissed her, but still, a wee Chax kiss Not surprised at Brax's little outburst either, I can see he would be mad with her just up and leaving. Looking forward too Brax finding out about and meeting Olivia! Update soon

Aww she called the baby Darryl So sad they lost Brax, but it's nice that Cheryl is there for Charlie, Maisie and baby Darryl. Great fic

Brax, Nooo Oh my jeez, this is going to be awful for Charlie and little Maisie!

Matt I like that Charlie is able to stand up to Matt but I hope that he doesnt hurt her or Ruby. Update soon!

Brilliant update. Love the Leah/Charlie friendship so much. Can't wait to see what happens with Brax and Charlie! Update soon

Aww Brax wanting to comfort Charlie already. sweet. hehe. Great update.

OOhhh Charlie met Brax And wow its been revealed already, I didnt expect that, but really looking forward to seeing what happens next!