Like You're Living In The Shadows (by Jen) - comments

[HighwayUnicorn]

Yay! Jen, you're writing another one.

That was a fantastic first part.

I love how you write emotions & everything.

It's just so perfect.

I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[Red Ranger 1]

Really interesting idea, with the alternate scenario for Geoff and Aden meeting.Looking forward to seeing how you develop it.

And best of all:It's got Melody in it!Okay, she'll probably end up being a third wheel but what the heck, she's in it!

Looking forward to more.

[HighwayUnicorn]

You always keep me so hooked on your Aden & Geoff fics.

It's amazing. Seriously fantastic. Well done.

I loved it!

It was just ... wow.

I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx

[Red Ranger 1]

I'm betting Geoff didn't anticipate meeting anyone quite like Aden.Loaves and fishes.He's got a sense of humour, all right.

[Red Ranger 1]

Some nice stuff in there, with Geoff still not quite knowing how to react to Aden and maybe even the other way round as well...Looking forward to seeing how it ends up.

[HighwayUnicorn]

Oh man. The next part is the end

But I look forward to seeing how you end it.

Another amazing chapter Jen. Fantastic work.

The emotions were written beautifully once again.

Love Carina xxx

[Red Ranger 1]

Really nicely written, with Geoff going the whole mile to let Aden know he's got people that care about him and the family seemingly adopting him.Loved Annie's little cameo.And awww, low grade Meoff moment at the end there so I'm happy.