callyha Posted August 19, 2010 Report Posted August 19, 2010 Hands were going again! I really LOVE your fic Danni! I LOVE LOVE LOVE it! So glad Charlie and Angelo have worked it out and I'm glad Charlie will move in to his house! Ava and Ben are sooooo cute, love them! You write them so well! I can't wait for the next update, I'm loving this story, loving all the cute things the kids do and I love how Ruby is all flustered with Jay and i love hoe Charlie and Angelo can still work things out and still love each other! More Soon please Quote
Rach Loves H&A Posted August 19, 2010 Report Posted August 19, 2010 Great Update! Glad Charlie has forgiven Angelo and they are working on their relationship. Hope they all move in together soon!! Quote
Barbara Posted August 19, 2010 Report Posted August 19, 2010 I'm so happy they are sorting things out. They'll get there and that's great. The children seem to understand a bit what is happening even though Ben seemed more interested in playing with his toys. More please. Quote
Chester-Sam Posted August 19, 2010 Report Posted August 19, 2010 Wonder how Ruby will take it? I'm glad they sorted things out - Sam! Quote
Inactive User Posted August 19, 2010 Report Posted August 19, 2010 Great chapter Update soon please x Quote
mellbell86 Posted August 21, 2010 Report Posted August 21, 2010 I'm so far behind and I'm not happy. My emails are depriving me of great reading Loved the last update. Together they are working it out. They want the same thing and oh it just made me so excited to read cos they are moving forward together and while they are taking small steps, it's just so exciting. The kids reactions were cute, I love how you write them. They are adorable. Wonder what Ruby is going to think of the progress they made over the weekend? Can't wait to read more, Danni. Loving it! Quote
callyha Posted August 22, 2010 Report Posted August 22, 2010 How sweet was Ruby been concerned for Charlie??? I loved it!! But now Shelly And I can't believe she's pregnant! What's gonna happen? Charlie better lay into both of them! Poor kids, wanting answers but they get told to go upstairs, which I can understand, but still. bless them. I HATE Shelley! Wish she'd leave! Danni!!! Update soon, make it all better! Charlie and Angelo can't have any more set backs!!! Quote
twinkletoesjess Posted August 22, 2010 Author Report Posted August 22, 2010 Cant believe I never commented on the last chapter before this one. Chapter 40 I really liked this chapter. I loved that Charlie was didnt really want to leave when it was time to go. I really liked the talk she had with Angelo about spending time together just the two of them. I thought it was great that Angelo and Charlie discussed where things went wrong and how it lead to him cheating. Glad Angelo and Charlie seemed to have agreed on spending a certain amount of time just the two of them during the week so they dont lose themselves again. I really love Ava, she is so in tune to everything around her. Nothing gets past her. I like the way you handled Charlie and Angelo telling the kids about what they had decided. Bless Ben asking if he could go play when asked if he understood. Chapter 41 You write Ruby and Charlie scenes so well. They really do come across as mother and daughter. I like that they always talk about whats on their mind and how Ruby doesnt hold back with Charlie. The little bit about Morag has me intriuged, where has she been disappearing of to and why. I feel as though a duh duh dunn needs to be added there are the end. Great cliffhanger Danni. I really liked this scene. I loved the way Charlie reacted to everything Shelly said but also the way she came to realise that what Shelly was saying were true about her never being able to fully trust him and how she will always be wondering. Cant wait till your next update Quote
mellbell86 Posted August 23, 2010 Report Posted August 23, 2010 Ah. The moment that woman walked in the door I knew she was going to announce that. She is trouble and a pain that just won't go away. Why does she have to come along and ruin some of their happiness once again. Silly, silly woman. If Charlie don't slap her, can I slap her! Please? Poor kids coming in and being sent straight upstairs, hope they don't hear anything because that would be awful but honestly I hope Charlie gives both the adults what for because they deserve it.. Oh she makes me angry! Also, cute moment between Ruby and Charlie, I loved that Great chapter. Looking forward to reading more soon. Keep writing, Danni x Quote
Inactive User Posted August 23, 2010 Report Posted August 23, 2010 Great chapter. I love reading every chapter of this amazing fanfiction you had written, Danni xx Loved the moment between Charlie and Ruby No!! Not again! Why can't Shelly get lost and leave Changelo alone?? Poor Charlie She and Angelo were working things out and then Shelly ruins it! And whoa the bombshell she dropped on Angelo Update soon please xxx Quote
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