I'll Always Be Here (by Danni02) - comments

[charlie29]

Lovely chapter. Loved how Angelo was so caring and went to get peanut butter for Charlie, and how he reassured her about the burns. Charlie seems to be a lot happier about the baby and it looks like they could be on the way to a reunion. Ruby is a lovely big sister, and her chat with Ava was very sweet. More!

[mellbell86]

Another great update. I'm lacking with reviews lately but honestly, every chapter just keeps getting better and better. Love it.

How cute are those kids! Ava answering the door and her questions, the way she invited Jay to the beach because his Ruby's friend, Aw. Had to laugh at Ben being on the naughty step. 4 minutes cause his 4. Too cute. Maybe we should put Angelo and Charlie on the naughty step, see if it pushes them along anymore although it seems they are making some sort of progress on their weekend away, I mean they are talking at least, not arguing. You can definiately feel the love. Peanut butter cravings at 4am. Angelo is willing to do anything, hope it pays off soon.

Looking forward to reading more x

[Sabrina]

Wow, I loved that chapter.

That was so sweet of Angelo to go out at 4am to get Charlie some peanut butter.

I like Jay - he was really good with Ava and Ben.

I loved Ruby's chat with Ava.

I loved how Angelo reassured Charlie about her burns, it's just a shame she thought the only reason he said it was to get in her good books.

Brilliant writing, Danni!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

[freckleface]

That was a lush chapter

I loved how Angelo went out to buy her peanut butter! Just so cute!

I agree with what some of the others have said, I'm a bit wary of Jay. I mean, he seems nice and friendly but I just feel a bit.. Cautious about him. It'd be nice to find out about his background ;)

Poor Charlie, i wish she wouldn't be so worried about her burns.

Hopefully Angelo's wish will come true and he'll get his family back!

More soon please

[Barbara]

I love the Angelo and Charlie scenes. I had a feeling she would have gone to sleep when he got back. They are talking and it seems to go well. I hope it’ll last.

Ben and Ava are adorable. I liked the naughty step scene. It was so sweet. Poor Ben! Ava has to be the best kid in the world if she never gets punished.

Jay likes kids so that’s a plus if Ruby is going to start dating him in the future. I hope so anyway.

More please

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. Can't wait to read more soon.

[mellbell86]

I really enjoyed the new update Nice to see some light conversation between Charlie and Angelo, throwing around some cute names. Angelo really wants a boy doesn't he. Guess he will just have to wait but I hope he doesn't get his hopes up too much. Had to laugh when he told Charlie she was buying lunch, cheeky. I love that between them. Wonder what he had planned for dinner? Will it bring them to another stage? I hope so. Glad, Charlie still wants to go with him.

Jay is cute. Spending his day with Ruby and all the kids, wonder he didn't run a mile especially with all those questions. Great to see Ruby hanging out with someone. Surf lessons sound like fun.

Looking forward to reading more soon xx

[twinkletoesjess]

I really liked this chapter. Aww Poor charlie getting sick especially whilst having a meal with Angelo. It was really nice of Angelo having his meal taken away so that Charlie didnt get even sicker. I like that the tea that Angelo bought for Charlie is working. Aww it was really nice that Angelo said he would stay at home with the baby so that Charlie could return to work like she wants to. I really like that they seem to be able to have a casual conversation and I liked them discussing baby names. I like Angelos reasoning for wanting another boy and Ruby as his own. Looking forward to seeing what Angelo has planned.

I really liked Ava and Ben questioning Jay about his family and his background and that he didnt seem to be put off by it. Im glad that Ruby has someone she can hang around with and Im really glad that he is understanding of her having a child and been very family orientated. Looking forward to seeing Ruby tackle a surfing lesson.

Looking forward to your next update

[Chester-Sam]

I dont know why I find Jay a bit strange, it's just a feeling I have..

Poor Rubes looking after the kids all weekend, they sound like a handful!

Wonder what Angelo has planned, he's being so sweet

Can't wait for another update,

- Sam!

[callyha]

Danni, I really look forward to reading your updates. I actually clapped like a freak when I saw the update!! .

I LOVED it! How sweet is Angelo for wanting a boy so they have two of each?

Glad Charlie is working on her marriage, they WILL work it out!

And how sweet was Angelo for having his meal taken away for Charlie? So sweet!

Ava and Ben sound like they have been a right handful for Ruby, but at least she has coped, and Jay! He seems nice, but I'm beginning to think there's more to him

Can't wait for more! (But I don't think my hands are looking forward to it...)

Update v. soon!!!!