I'll Always Be Here (by Danni02) - comments

[twinkletoesjess]

Another great chapter. I loved the beginning with Ava not wanting to play with Sophie and Olivia any more and taking refuge under the bed crying. I thought the little bit with Martha and Ava under the ned was so cute. Poor Ava seeing her mum upset and not wanting to upset her even more by asking questions.

Aww it was sweet of Angelo to get Charlie some ginger tea. Poor Ava knowing things are not right between her parents but not knowing everything and still clinging onto hope that they will all live together again.

I really liked the arguement between Angelo and Charlie. Charlie was right he shouldnt have made her that promise knowing there was a good chance of it never happening again. Im glad that Charlie refused to talk to him and put the children first.

Looking forward to your next update

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. I agree with twinkletoesjess. You are a good writer Update soon

[charlie29]

Great updates. It was right for Ruby to tell Angelo what had happened to Charlie. Really hope Charlie and Angelo will sort out things soon, but doesn't look like it. The kids are so cute and well written, feel so sorry for little Ava. More soon please!

[callyha]

Great update Danni!

I loved how Ava opened up to Martha about had she had noticed that Charlie was sad and why she was sad.

How sweet was Angelo for buying that tea? Hope he and Charlie can actually sit down and talk things through, like Rachel and Charlie talked about in the previous chapter, they've been through so much and have come out the other side still happy and in love.

More soon please

[twinkletoesjess]

Aww I really liked this Chapter. Bless Ava pretending to be sick so she could get Charlie and Angelo talking. Like Charlie said she is pretty smart and her plan worked. Trust Angelo not to be able to tell she was faking it though. Aww at angelo sleeping on the couch, glad it didnt turn into an arguement though. Haha charlie is craving peanut butter. Im glad that they were able to have a normal conversation its a start. Bless Ben having a nightmare and then wetting the bed.

I really liked your conversation between Angelo, Charlie and Ava, I really liked what they said to her and how they explained what was happening. Must be hard for her when she picks thing up all the time and not knowing whats fully going on. Im glad Charlie has agreed to go away with Angelo to talk more about whats going on

looking forward to your next update

[ashleyjane]

That was great.

I liked how charlie and angelo are going away for a weekend away together to talk.

How ben wet his bed.

And expecially how ava pretended to be sick so charlie and angelo would talk.

[Inactive User]

Amazing update

Aww poor Ava pretending to be sick so her parents can talk, lol.

Glad Changelo are going away for the weekend. Hopefully they will be able to work things out

More soon please x

[freckleface]

Aaaw I loved the last two updates

The conversation with Martha and Ava was really cute and well-written.

I don't blame Charlie for going off about Angelo about the promise he made to Ava but I'm glad that they were able to talk in the next chapter.

I loved Ava's sneaky little plan to get them talking and to be fair it actually worked pretty well! Hopefully now on this trip away they can sort more things out (:

More soon please!

[Chester-Sam]

It's good that they can start to talk, it's a shame it took the brain power of a little girl to get there! Lol,

Poor Ben

Good stuff,

- Sam!

[callyha]

That was an AMAZING update Danni!

How cute was Ava pretending she was ill to get Charlie and Angelo talking.

And little Ben, dreaming about monsters eating them!

I when Charlie had a craving for peanut butter. And how Angelo thought it was funny.

I really hope they can get passed everything and get their marriage back on track, and I love how Ava and Ben are trying to help as well, so sweet"

Can't wait for more, I'm LOVING this!