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Another great update, I laughed at the bit with Ava and High School musical :lol: ,I thought it was nice the way Ben went to greet Angelo when he came home, so sweet, although stupid Angelo didn't really think his story through well enough. He should have told her the truth at the start, she would have found out eventually. Poor Charlie, I'm sure she feels so betrayed, and hurt and angry that her husband could do this to her. You wrote their argument really well, and I could feel the tension from the moment he walked in through the door. I don't blame Charlie for kicking him out but I hope they get past this. Keep up the good work!

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Great Chapter Danni. Bless Ava and her love for High School Musical its well cute. i love that Ruby takes the kids out for ice cream so that Charlie can Talk to Angelo. Like I said the last chapter I just love their relationship and how Ruby knows just what her mum needs. Oooh the arguement was intense, I cant believe Angelo lied to Charlie and that she threw him out. Ben was so cute in the way he greeted Angelo though aww.

Cant wait for your next Chapter :D

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Great updates!

Sorry I didn't comment on the other one.. I didn't read it until now!

Angelo, angelo, angelo why did he cheat on Charlie ! :( She doesn't deserve it ....

I think they need some space from each other then sit down and have a good decent chat about their relationship and this baby.

Ava and Ben are soo cute with the DVD and pancakes! :)

I love this story! :D

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Wow! Two updates- and I missed the first one! OMG

Chapter 25.

With the pancakes-How cute! Ben and Ava are so adorable! :wub:

Poor Charlie, Worried sick and still suffering with the sickness :(

Chapter 26

Reactions from both Angelo and Charlie were so true to life! I could picture them on the TV arguing like that! Well done!

I hope they can move past this, (IE, Angelo been too drunk to remember he didn't sleep with that woman :wink: )

Ava :wub: loving High School Musical- :lol: Ben's reaction is the same as mine!

And Rubes, taking them out for ice cream. yum!!

Brilliant couple of updates as usual! Can't wait for more Danni. xx

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:o I can't believe Angelo actually slept with her! What was he thinking? Not only is he married with children but his wife is pregnant with a baby she's only keeping because of him! I hope he has to seriously grovel to get Charlie back because he doesn't deserve forgiveness. Poor Charlie! You wrote her reaction really well, please update soon
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I really liked this chapter. I loved that Ruby took the kids out for icecream to get them out of the house. I love that she is close to her siblings in this fic and tries to help charlie out. Bless Ava picking up on all the arguments and mentioning it in front of Leah. I love that Morag tried to be there for Charlie but in the end it was Ruby that she needed. I love their relationship. Poor Charlie still loving Angelo but hating him at the same time.

Looking forward to your next update :D

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