Haymaiden Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Title: Kids with Kids Type of Story: Medium Fic (with ongoing chapters) Main Characters: Geoff, Claudia, Rachel BTTB Rating: T Genre:Romance Warnings: It's themed around teenage pregnancy Spoilers: Yes Summary: Claudia is pregnant . . . what happens next? Chapter One Claudia: Hey Martha. Martha: Yeah, what do you want? Claudia: I'm late . . . for my period. Martha: Stay calm, OK. Take a pregnancy test and see what happens. Two Hours Later Claudia: Geoff. Remember how you hold me that Nicole thought she was pregnant and she wasn't? Geoff: Yeah. Claudia: I'm pregnant. Yeah I know it could be Lachie's, but it's yours, I know. Six months later Claudia: Ooh. Geoff: Clauds, are you all right? Claudia collapses. Geoff picks her up and carries her back to the homestead. Geoff: Martha, call an ambulance. 20 minutes later Claudia: Hi. Oh! Rachel: What's happening? Claudia: It's too soon. It's too soon. 5 hours later Geoff: Clauds, are you OK? Claudia: Yeah, fine. She's in the incubator. She's tiny. Rachel says she can live but being 14 weeks premature I don't know if our baby can make it. Geoff: Can we going and see her? Claudia: Yeah. Let's go. Claudia gets out of bed and walks off with Geoff. At the incubator, Claudia put her head on Geoff's shoulder and starts crying. Then, she collapes. Geoff: Rach! Rachel: Geoff, what happening? Geoff: I don't know. Geoff and Rachel carry Claudia to her bed. When Claudia comes to, she is in pain again. Claudia: The contractions, their back. Rachel: Jules, get a doppler machine. She could have another baby stuck. 5 minutes later Claudia: What's that? Rachel: It's another baby. You'll need a caesarean in order for that baby to survive. Claudia is wheeled off for a caesarean. 2 hours later Rachel: Geoff, the other baby, it's a girl. 1 hour later Geoff: Clauds, both little girls are in incubators. They're tiny, being premature twins, but they should survive. 1 day later Claudia and Geoff visit the twins in their incubators. Geoff: What should we call them? Claudia: Geaudia and Cloff? Geoff: No. Claudia: What about Emily . . . and Paige. Geoff: Perfect. Comments please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Changelo Fan Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Really great, Hayley. Claudia and Geoof having a baby would be cool. I like Emily and Paige. Update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haymaiden Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Thanks Ryleigh Chapter Two Claudia: What about middle names? Geoff: You pick. Claudia: OK. What about Emily Grace and Paige Julia. Geoff: Perfect. Claudia: Hammond or Campbell? Geoff: What, which surname? Claudia: I think they should keep the Hammond. If we marry, then it can change. Geoff: Your asking me to marry you? Claudia: No, silly. One day, if we realise we want to spend the rest of our lives together, then we can get married. Geoff: So we're keeping them right? Claudia: I can't imagine life without them. Geoff: Emily and Paige, I'm sorry. Your mum wasn't planning to have you but that doesn't mean we don't love you. It's short but it's the next installment. Comments please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Nice idea, I'm enjoying this.Looking forward to seeing where you take it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haymaiden Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Thanks Red Ranger 1 Chapter Three Two Days Later Annie: They're so cute! Rachel: Can I talk to Claudia for a second? Alone. Geoff and Annie walk out of the room. Claudia: What do you want? Rachel: You'll obviously need to keep to a lawyer and find a good couple. Claudia: I'm not giving them up. Rachel: It's the best option. Claudia: No! I'm sorry. Two Minutes Later Geoff: What did Rachel need to talk to you about? Claudia: She just assumed we were giving them up. Once again, it's short. I don't know where it's going to go. Comments Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Interesting.Liked Annie's reaction and Claudia wanting to keep the babies.(Some longer chapters would be nice though...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haymaiden Posted June 7, 2009 Report Share Posted June 7, 2009 Thanks Red Ranger 1 Warning: Slight sexual content Chapter Four Three Hours Later Geoff: Dear God. I'm sorry for all the sex before marriage with Nicole and Claudia and now I'm a teenage father, but I still love you. Amen. Five Minutes Later Claudia: Where have you been? Geoff: I just went down to the chapel. To pray. One Day Later Claudia's Father: I've found good adoptive parents. Catherine and Kimberly Hyde. Claudia: I'm not giving them up for adoption. Claudia's Father: So you're going let two healthy young girls be raised be foolish teenage parents? Rachel: Mr and Mrs Hammond, I think you should go now. Claudia: No! No, you doctor woman, I'm not leaving this place until my daughter agrees that a teenager can not raise a child properly! Claudia starts crying. Rachel takes Claudia's parents outside. Claudia: Why! Why do they have to think this way! Why! It's not their body! Or their babies! It's mine! Two Hours Later Rachel: I have good news. Irene is a DOCS carer and has agreed to take on you and Geoff until you both finish school. Geoff: That's great! Claudia: So we can keep the babies? Rachel: Irene has taken you on. She's your official carer. I'll call her and if it's OK I'll tell you. Three Months Later Claudia: All ready to go? Geoff: Yep. Claudia: I can't believe Emily and Paige are coming home with us. Geoff: Well they'll be back in two days. For the testing. Claudia: What testing? Geoff: You remember, the six weeks old testing. But because they were born premature, it hasn't happened until now. Claudia: Of course! I hope it's long enough. Comments Please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted June 8, 2009 Report Share Posted June 8, 2009 Decent length, it'll be interesting to see what happens now they're living with Irene. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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