bexxx123 Posted July 24, 2008 Report Share Posted July 24, 2008 Good start, liking the story so far but Joshua and Ashley seen really strange wonder what their characters will be like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle4eva Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Chapter 2. Aden was walking on the beach thinking about his present and if she would like it. Ever since Belle and Aden got together he changed alot and tried his best to always be polite to everyone,Aden was now thinking about how Belle totally supported him about his grandfather and never ran away,when he bumped into Ashley. `Oh god, Im sorry. I didnt see you`, he said trying to be polite. `Thats okay, it was my fault too.`Im Ashley, I just arrived here`,she replied noticing his school uniform. `Im Aden. I could give you a tour if you want?` `Dont you have to be somewhere?`,she asked looking at his clothes trying to be obvious. `Im on my lunch break so I have time.` `Well, I would love to but Im busy. How about this afternoon?`, she asked thinking if he had any plans with a certain someone. `Sorry, Im spending some time with my girlfriend`,he said. BINGO! she thought. Trying to hide the smile that was coming by covering her mouth with her hand and prentending to scratch her face. `Maybe next time` `Yeah, Definetly!`,Aden said looking down at the sand and then remebering about school and quickly checked his watch for the time but as usual it froze. `Do you know the time by any chance?`, he asked sounding desperate `Yep, Its 1:50`. `I gotta go catch you around`, he screamed running towards the school till she couldnt see him. Leaving Ashley with a smirk. -------------------- Belle walked up the stairs of Romans house where Aden lived holding in one hand his present and the other his card. She opened the door to see Aden kissing another women. Sorry its short.Chapter 3 will be longer. Next time: Why is Aden kissing that girl? How will Belle react? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
adelle Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Aden you bad boy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zzazzb Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 Hey! thats not very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xknomex Posted July 28, 2008 Report Share Posted July 28, 2008 you cant split adelle up!!!!!!! please udate ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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