Opposites (by Zetti) - comments

[Barbara]

It's a good start. I like it!

I wonder how Jack and Martha are going to meet.

More please.

[HeavenForbid]

Great start!

I like it. Very well written.

Looking forward to more.

[Zetti]

Thanks for that. More will be up very soon...

[Barbara]

Jack and Martha have met. That's good. But he had to arrest her. That's bad. At least, she's not being charged.

Poor Martha! Her life seems complicated.

Jack has a girlfriend or should I say "had a girlfriend"? Maybe he can go to dinner with Martha now.

More please.

[matticus01]

hmmmm this is good

Jack HAD a gf

Jack and Martha met

[Zetti]

Had being the operative word

I will update tomorrow hopefully..

Thanks...

[matticus01]

NO...JACK...how dare you

Sophie i hate you

I am gunna bash sophie

wonder who was watching them

update soon

[Barbara]

No Martha!

No, Jack, you don't want to be with Sophie anymore. She cheated on you.

There's another girl out there for you. You've already met her.

Wonder who is watching them. That doesn't sound good.

More please.

[Barbara]

Jack is back together with Sophie! I hope it won't last. He has to date Martha!

Tasha got the job she wanted. That's great!

Who are the new interns?

A whole week without a new chapter! But exams are more important.

More please.

[HeavenForbid]

Great updates

Wonder who the interns are!

Update soon.