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That is very good and descriptive.

The best bit was this

He stepped over her limp, frail body and he knew she was dead. Her usually brown, glossy hair was now knotted and mangled with blood. Her face wore an odd expression. It was almost as if a moment before he had killed her, she knew she was about to die. It was sad, almost, that she spent the last second of her life, knowing what was coming. Ignorance is bliss and this wasn’t.

I loved the one shot and maybe you could add more to it :) :)

Loved the title, very inventive

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